Interesting format

Wow, I liked this a lot. I've never written a freeverse before but I plan to, but yours was nice :) Hey, I see we're from the same country, so, hi...(I hope you don't think I'm weird now lol) Your stories are probably some of the best I've seen on the Harry Potter Fandom. I really admire your work. Keep it up! :)

I loved this Ash! I. Liked the formatting, it was clever, and I like how sweet it was. Ron was adorable, how happy he was that Hermione dated, got engaged to and married him.
Lovely job!

[Just the way she KISSES you is enough to know how you [feel]

When you do, you can't imagine

K.I.S.S.I.N.G

anyone else]

that line was just so adoreable gah ash you flawless thing i don't even ship romione /or/ like fluff that much but you've got me squeeing like a mad thing.

although i do prefer freeverses with less formatting, i thought in your case the formatting worked well. the idea of having each letter of certain words was fabulous!

overall, this was lovely and fluffy! you should write more freeverses!

Aww this was adorable :D it felt so Ron-like, especially the bit where he said he couldn't believe not everyone loves her like he does but he's glad they don't, hehe. You cutie, Ron.

I'd say that in general the formatting distracted from the words rather than adding to them, but I did like the writing. And I liked the moments when the formatting fits the meaning, like "loooong." :)

Not bad at all for somebody who swore they'd never write freeverse!

Aww, the idea of this was really sweet. I loved the ending, especially. I think the formatting was a little overdone; it detracted from the fic a bit, and made it less of a ... flowy? read. It didn't flow as well, because I don't think "flowy" is a word. :P The writing and wording, though, was good. :)

Different from what I usually enjoy, but I loved it all the same :)

It's nonsense what you wrote in the footnote. You bloody well can write freeverse, and brilliantly too from this example. :o)
It gets into Ron's thoughts about Hermione so well and is so romantic and sweet. Loved it, even though as a rule I'm no great poetry fan.
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).