really cute, nicely done!

Awwwwwwww, that was so CUTE! Marik, afraid of the thunder, ingenious. I kept thinking “If Bakura doesn't comfort him, I will kill him.“ And yay! No one died!
(I really hope their home doesn't burn down if the neglected popcorn feels jealous)
(Imagine the irony of that though XD
“I will always protect you."
"Well, yeah. I know that already. But can you for one little moment think about the HOUSE?!“)

That was soooo adorable ! Keep writing! ** Just beautiful

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THIS IS A REALLY GOOD FAN FICTION MAKE MORE! Was that enough bashing for you? Lol XD I really liked it it was cute.

short and sweet
especialy for a first fanfic, this is really sweet

Very sweet. I suppose it gets a little bit cheesy at the very end, but it's cute and I really like the way you write. The popcorn is unique little feature that seems to suit Marik.

Thiefshipping never gets old, does it?

Love your pen name BTW.