nice job I wonder when the return the Kings going to be staring

I wonder when the big battle for the pride lands will be coming up with all the Orcs and I wonder if Witch-king of Angmar will be in it and I wonder if Nala will fight him ?

i wonder when he'll be doing the Return of the King and don't you think Gollum turn on Vitani and Kopa at the end and wonder if he will try to strangle one of them at the end

NICE JOB

nice

ood job I think it would be pretty cool if we got to see a fight with a ock and Kovu in end of the first story ?

nice work

cool chapter I love that we're always win the whole thing about the ring Tell them the whole story I think I've been pretty cool if Simba talked about Gollum Vitani

cool chapter like they are running to Rivendell
It was pretty cool. It would have been pretty cool if Nala would have gotten attacked by Nazgul, trying to grab Nala by the throat and tries to choke her.

great start

nice chapter it looks really good

nice chapter very good ending little surprised that there was not a fight orc at the end i would have love to see kovu fight one Sarumans big Commander Orcs ?

Lol. So why did you comment then?

Yes, and you are one of those rambling idiots yourself, Young Money.
Now instead of using hashtags and getting into pointless little agruements about the same old crap, report the damn author properly.

If you actually think his stories are horrible, which they are, then why waste time with this bullshit.

Hurry it up already, people, REPORT him don't bother wasting time commenting in his very obviously fucked up review section.

Nah, some people didn't actually expose him. They just ramble on shitty lines about how cool they are.

But as long as we report him. Whocares about wha yo say unless it's disturbing and just wrong like the author.