Pues yo no eh visto ningún momento de hermanos entre Raph y donnie la verdad que no eh visto la serie 2003, solo la antigua y la nueva de 2012 y no eh visto momentos de Raph y donnie así que no entiendo mucho, en serio que lo intento pero no no me va para nada

i am the oldest in my family... but, i am the shortest member of my family as well... my little brother gave me one heck of a nic name:

'Little, big sister.'

i just call him:

'Big, little brother."

He just laughs at it and goes on.

Another great installment! I've loved the word 'bunk' ever since Eugene O'Neill's Long Day's Journey Into Night. Splinter is so wise - and mean. LoL I've always felt that 2012 Splinter is kind of harsh on those boys, but you wrote both him and Raphael perfectly! I agree with everything you've said about Raphael - how he puts up this tough exterior to hide his softer side. Can't wait to read the next letter!

Amazing stories! You are totally on point and in character with their dialogue and actions. Your stories vary from poignant to hilarious to sweet, but I've enjoyed them all.

...well, coulda been worse. At least APRIL wasn't there LOL

I laughed so hard xD

Definitely not ooc, you got the nick turtles' personalities right on the money, and you portrayed Mikey how I pretend he is on the show instead of the bumbling idiot the writers have sadly made him. Fun story nicely done.

You may not, but I DO!
Freaking hilariousness all around. Job well done

hahaha yes. mikey u sneaky turtle. great one shot, love the awkwardness that mikey so easily pries out of his brothers!

HAHAHAHA! I'm laughing so so so so so soooo hard right now! Mikey is not only a genius, but a perverted one at that! I should totally try that with my brothers! That is...if I had any...
Anyways great job and I can't wait for the next one!
Update soon!

That was funny. I knew Mikey was a genius. It's obvious, isn't it?

Hahaha Mikey you twisted little shrimp xD
Awesome dude! Keep it up

LMAO, awesome, just awesome, loved it!

yes they do! teach thensplinter! i like the incorporation of japanese in the story... here as well as in 2k12! great short! can't wait for the next!

I am really enjoying these. I don't think you could come up with anything funnier than the paint ball chapter, and then I read the morning after drinking with Casey chapter! Your stories are very imaginative and well written- keep em coming! More line ch 1 okay too (don my fav, and I am a sucker for any stories with him and raph, ESP if either one comes to the others rescue and then there is bro fluff).