Reviews for Determined
NaLutrash14 chapter 1 . 3/20/2018
awww! loved this one so much too! You yet again perfectly captured what the character would have been actually thinking! Oh my God! It's like you're the one who created Pepper and Tony! Hahahaha. Absolutely loved it as always! Keep it up! Pepperony forever!
JuseaPeterson chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
I loved that this goes with the one from Tony's point of view. I liked her memories of those couple of different times that she was remembering. I also liked her thoughts about Tony and how much she was happy that they had found Tony. And I loved how it ended with her smiling when Tony appeared much like how in his he smiled when he saw her.
halcyon-red chapter 1 . 1/8/2015
Really nice companion piece to "One Voice", thank you! I love the insight into ways that Tony is redeeming, especially Tony's conversation with Jarvis. Now I'm curious...what did Tony get for his birthday from Pepper? She seems like someone who gets people something they don't even know they needed but will love. :)
nancyozz chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Sorry I didn't leave a review until today...I wish IM had shown just for a minute what Pepper was going through while Tony was missing so this is great out filling in the blanks
SparkaDark chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
The sentence that begins, "Behind that facade..." is my favorite in this one. Fantastic mirror to "One Voice." The way he confides in Jarvis is written in such a way I can actually hear RDJ's voice. You clearly know these characters well. Second favorite line: "Any female with a pulse could tell he was every bit as good-looking as he thought he was." Classic Pepper.
QueenOfHearts3 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
yep. its official, youre bloody awesome :D fantastic "other half" to "One Voice." love the history you give them on the whole, but that overheard convo with JARVIS is hands-down my fave. very true for them. i mean, heck, why else would she put up with him, unless she saw what was really going on behind all that grandiose jerkiness? as you note, she certainly doesnt NEED to stay, but rather chooses to. true loyalty is rare, especially in a world like Tony's
fantasia-49 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
ohhhhh i love this one really much! ONe voice was excellent but this one as a plus! It has some memories in it about their feelings, characters and i love it!
SO great you could have made a story starting with it and see what could happen!
Nicoley117-TheBlueMartini chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Aww super sweet! I loved it. Thanks for writing this! I was hoping someone would write about Pepper's feelings during this part!

-Nicole
Terez chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
This one was good too, I really liked seeing Pepper's side of things, I'd imagine there was a lot going though her head at this moment. I absolutely loved the flashback of him fixing a computer during a meeting, makes me want to write all about it or read it! great job :)
Annalay chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
oh wow soo sweet I like your Pepper very in character great story
Nyna Sand chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
That was such a nice piece, I loved the insight into Pepper thoughts, particularly the part with the last flashback, it was nice seeing Tony acknowledge how much he needs Pepper even before Afghanistan (:
Miss Starfire chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Wow. Yeah, uhm...wow...When are you writing your next story?
starkind chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
Wow, this left me in a puddle of gooey feels - great one shot! I do love the POV of Pepper in this one; that she knows a side of Tony nobody else really gets to see (esp. loved the "he was just being incredibly honest part") The flashback scene in the workshop got a big smile on my face; I love glimpses of Tony proving he has a heart even before he became Iron Man.
In short: Lovely story, please write more!
True ShapeShifter chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
AWWW! Again - Absolutely brilliant! You really did get Pepper, and, not only that, but you 'got' Tony really well again too! :) Even more deeply :)
1MorningStar3 chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
these kids are gonna kill me, they're the best, and you do a great job portraying them :)
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