Reviews for Unexpected Turn
MissYuki15 chapter 3 . 9/15/2014
Wait a minute was that a hinted SmoAce...? OMG! Tell ME!
Fio chapter 3 . 7/14/2014
OMG best story ever pls release more i can't wait to read it you are the best at this
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 3 . 5/9/2014
yeah... Pirate degree cool... You are really creative.. Haha.. I am so lost in your stories...
Guest chapter 3 . 10/22/2013
For sure you hinted at Ace x Smoker xD
And sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi, so... Don't mind my previous comments too much!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/22/2013
Doesn't Law call Luffy "Mugiwara-ya"? Or in English: "Straw Hat-ya"?
Luffy calls Law "Torao" Or in English: "Tra-guy" Cause his name is hard to pronounce,
And i don't think Law would admit to having his ass handed to him on a silver platter by someone else... xD
And wow, Luffy's so compassionate in the end! c:
So cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Law's a bit OOC on this one... S'okay, though! I like a mushy Law xD
Few spelling mistakes, but great job! This was your first fic? :D
Ko-Sensei chapter 3 . 9/3/2013
Protective Ace. Automatic win.
Ko-Sensei chapter 2 . 9/3/2013
Luffy and Law both are kind of girly-but that's just how the fluffy homo goes. Besides, Luffy would make anyone either exasperated or very sweet. It is kind of soap opera, but it's a good kind.
Ko-Sensei chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
"Felt hungry, just not for meat."

Apocalypse! Kidding.
AssialaOtaku51 chapter 3 . 8/25/2013
Hahahahahahaha

Thats just soooooooooo embarrassing for ace

Love ya author!

Tnx for making this story
AssialaOtaku51 chapter 2 . 8/25/2013
Now that was fast...

AWESOME!)!

You sure know what youre doing

Love it!
AssialaOtaku51 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
I didnt expect that reaction

But that makes interesting...

LOVE IT!
Yuki Rivaille chapter 3 . 7/26/2013
arigatou owo
Yuki Rivaille chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
kawaii *w*
Yuki Rivaille chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
KYAAA sou cute desu!
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