Reviews for Unexpected Turn |
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MissYuki15 chapter 3 . 9/15/2014 Wait a minute was that a hinted SmoAce...? OMG! Tell ME! |
Fio chapter 3 . 7/14/2014 OMG best story ever pls release more i can't wait to read it you are the best at this |
Paulie MickeyJ chapter 3 . 5/9/2014 yeah... Pirate degree cool... You are really creative.. Haha.. I am so lost in your stories... |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/22/2013 For sure you hinted at Ace x Smoker xD And sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi, so... Don't mind my previous comments too much! |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/22/2013 Doesn't Law call Luffy "Mugiwara-ya"? Or in English: "Straw Hat-ya"? Luffy calls Law "Torao" Or in English: "Tra-guy" Cause his name is hard to pronounce, And i don't think Law would admit to having his ass handed to him on a silver platter by someone else... xD And wow, Luffy's so compassionate in the end! c: So cute! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 Law's a bit OOC on this one... S'okay, though! I like a mushy Law xD Few spelling mistakes, but great job! This was your first fic? :D |
Ko-Sensei chapter 3 . 9/3/2013 Protective Ace. Automatic win. |
Ko-Sensei chapter 2 . 9/3/2013 Luffy and Law both are kind of girly-but that's just how the fluffy homo goes. Besides, Luffy would make anyone either exasperated or very sweet. It is kind of soap opera, but it's a good kind. |
Ko-Sensei chapter 1 . 9/3/2013 "Felt hungry, just not for meat." Apocalypse! Kidding. |
AssialaOtaku51 chapter 3 . 8/25/2013 Hahahahahahaha Thats just soooooooooo embarrassing for ace Love ya author! Tnx for making this story |
AssialaOtaku51 chapter 2 . 8/25/2013 Now that was fast... AWESOME!)! You sure know what youre doing Love it! |
AssialaOtaku51 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013 I didnt expect that reaction But that makes interesting... LOVE IT! |
Yuki Rivaille chapter 3 . 7/26/2013 arigatou owo |
Yuki Rivaille chapter 2 . 7/26/2013 kawaii *w* |
Yuki Rivaille chapter 1 . 7/26/2013 KYAAA sou cute desu! w |