Reviews for A Divergent PJO story |
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GreekFangirl74 chapter 4 . 6/5 I like it, but please watch your spelling! It's kind of confusing! I do really like the story line. |
aarna rastogi chapter 17 . 5/18 Hi. I love your story! Its really interesting. I was wondering if you ever going to update. Sorry about this. Its like 2020 and the last time you updated was 2017. So umm sorry for asking. |
MagicMistle chapter 17 . 10/22/2019 There are no such things as mistakes, only happy little accidents. |
strawberries12 chapter 17 . 4/18/2018 Love this story! |
Guest chapter 17 . 8/25/2017 I loved it ad hated it pls let there be more |
ROCuevas chapter 17 . 8/15/2017 Quite well done. Been a while so welcome back. |
Laasya chapter 16 . 7/21/2017 Omg! I simply loved these 16 pages! Please continue the story don't abandon it. Your plot is simply amazing and I love this divergent and POV crossover! You do have a few grammatical mistakes but you'll get over it I know you will cause even I've dealt with criticism regarding my grammar since I'm from India and I usually speak Telugu or Hindi. Pretty please with hot chocolate and sprinkles on the top continue this story |
Guest chapter 15 . 4/25/2017 Heroes of Olympus is ama-ZHANG:D |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/25/2017 Tori's brother was George not Henry |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/14/2017 JUST SPELL TOOK RIGHT |
Olaf chapter 16 . 4/26/2016 Why is Jason and Thalia so mean to each other? They may be siblings, but still. |
Olaf chapter 15 . 4/26/2016 Thank you for letting us see the real like. I nearly died when i found out be was a total basterd. When I read the real book of pjato. |
Olaf chapter 14 . 4/26/2016 First off, I'm EXACTLY like annabeth. Th spider part left me scared to death. I got zero sleep. Why did you have to be so grafic?! |
Olaf chapter 6 . 4/26/2016 Loved it, but you need to work on spelling. Don't just wiz through it. Take your time. People will like it even better. But absolutely loved it, but I could hardly understand it. Work on grammar and spelling, please and thank you. |
Olaf chapter 5 . 4/26/2016 Loved it, but try commas. They'll help. I could hardly understand it. But I love what I could understand! |