I just want to say.. the contents of this story.. especially the use of spanking is something that rings true with my own journey of dealing with assault. I’ve never read something I could relate to as much as this one.

Talk about a double standard. He gets stupid with impunity. She is childish and is punished. Good for the goose Good for the gander.

No acabo de entender como Ana estuvo con Grey y la separación fue por la correa y entonces fue novio de José y la violó?

No entiendo cómo si la violó no fue a pedir ayuda, y su papá? Y pq iría al show de José si le hizo eso? Parece una Ana más tonta que la original.

You can write but you have as appalling lack of knowledge about how the criminal justice system works! This lack of facts made the flow of your story not credible! For major felonies such as rape, kidnapping, assault with a gun; parole after 8 months is ludicrous! There are sentencing guidelines for each of these crimes that carry major time penalty in prison!

Wow thanks for the very good read.

Good story

it is, however, one of the most unrealistic stories I've read. Why the duck does Christian hit her?! he's no better than jose

tomorrow is another day?! oh my god, you quoted Margaret Mitchell! I live thee

Isn't this a copy of a story much similar in fanfiction?

Good story

This is the worst story I have read

Ana has been raped and Christian is spanking her are you kidding me

I loved it!

another great story ty

stop with them spanking...your Christian can talk until he is blue in their face trying to justify his actions to ana...but there reality is that he is Abusing her...aND YOUR REPEATED USE OF THIS ACTION IS PERPETUATING THE myth that such action is acceptable STOP!