I really loved this chapter! Please write more soon!

Please please please write the sequel! This is the only Eragon fanfic I've read where I feel like the quality and story can compare to the originals! I love Peri and Datia, and I really really want to read the sequel!

Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Aaaaah, I really enjoyed this story. I wish the description of how the two factions of riders came to be was less 'this happened this happened and this too.' Show not tell and all that. Otherwise, good characters, decent dialogue, very good dragons, and good development pace.

Looking forward to more!

Poor Datia. Those types of nightmares must be terrifying. And poor Peri, having so much running to deal with...

YAY, THEY'VE ALMOST FOUND NICK! Anyway, if you do decide to write a sequel, I'll be stalking you over to it. Just saying. Great chapter!

I like learning about Peri, but that was downright depressing. I guess it was necessary, though...

I can't wait to read the next part of the story! :D

WHAT THE FUCK!

WHOO, RUNNING

Yeah, not really. Well, whatever. It will still be better than all of the camping in the seventh Harry Potter. :P

Great chapter. I can just envision how pissed off the dragons were. :D

Of course it was DARETHHHHH-
Peri needs to learn how to reign in her temper. If Esteba wasn't a bit faster, Peri would have skewered her on account of a false accusation. Well, at least Hadin's back. I missed him. o
Here's hoping they grab Nick soon. Good chapter!

NOOOO NICKKKK!
I had a feeling something like this was going to happen, yet it still came as a shock. Poor Peri. Nothing seems to go right for her. Argh, now they have to get back out with no Nick! D:

Why do u hate yourself?

I AM SO PUMPED ABOUT THE NEXT CHAPTER! Oh, gosh, I hope Nick's okay, though. :c

And whoop whoop, go Esteba and Vagero! :D

Aw, sorry to hear about your foot!

Poor Peri. If I had been stuck with that old wench, I probably would have Hulk-smashed some walls. Well, she must have a lot more patience than me. Anyway, it's a good intermission, and I'm glad to know more about Peri's past. Great chapter!

Agh, no! I hate cliffhangers! D: Well, great chapter anyway. I really like seeing how Peri's progressed so far; she won against Hadin, even if it was by cheating! :P

I sort of panicked when I saw that chapter 16 was gone, but lo and behold, IMPROVEMENTS! :D
Anyway, I hate Lydia with the burning passion of one thousand fiery suns. *grumbles* Great job, as usual! But PLEASE DON'T TAKE MONTHS TO WRITE A NEW CHAPTER!