Reviews for Something Beyond Your Control
Guest chapter 24 . 2/4/2015
Omg you have to update this... It's amazing
Mnca chapter 24 . 1/8/2015
I don't think greggie needs to apoligize or shelly I think that she's always the victim and even tho its partially her fault they're all hurt so she needs to such it up because shes always the victim
HONEYBOOCHILD12 chapter 13 . 11/3/2014
THIS IS JUST LIKE JOSH BUT THERER JS THREE OF THEM. NOT RIGHT AT ALL
shadowgrneyes chapter 24 . 9/24/2014
Yay, you're back! I'm so glad she's awake and with her boys. Her friends will come around. It's hard to forgive, I know from experience. Keep up the good work sweetie. I'm loving this story. Hey, I came out of lurk mode! Don't faint and hurt yourself. Muah!
mitchy21 chapter 24 . 9/23/2014
I love this story !... I think it will take time to heal her body and the hurt but think she will survive with the help of dean, Seth and roman by her side... Greggie the little shit ! Think he has to talk to her get it all out and forgive and realize it wasn't her fault. Shelley never liked her lol thought it was weird but think she will survive to with the help of her friend the officer . maybe they should get together that would be cool. Hope I fed your addiction. Thanks for feeding ours !
mitchy21 chapter 23 . 9/6/2014
Feed us make more please !...love this story :)
Guest chapter 23 . 8/27/2014
Update soon
IRENELOVE83 chapter 21 . 2/20/2014
I was digging the story till the whole shelly thing. She is turning out to be a mary sue, everyone whats her in some shape or form. She is already has problems with her past coming back then she is with three guys and adding another person to the mix is to much. Its to much going on in this story the initial storyline alone was enough.
ShieldPrincess chapter 20 . 11/16/2013
Loved, loved, LOVED the update! The longer, the better. ;) more soon please!
ProudHooligan chapter 18 . 9/5/2013
Omg from beginning to end, i couldn't stop reading!
Guest chapter 17 . 8/15/2013
Wow you know, I didn't know how you were going to approach the girl on girl scene but I was digging it oddly lol. Wonder what's going to happen with Shelly. Can't wait for the Shield to return home so my ovaries can explode haha. ;p
AJPunkGirl95 chapter 16 . 8/8/2013
OMG this was AmAzInG. I loved every second of it, my ovaries feel like they are going to explode. I can't handle this. Update quickly I need to find out what happens. :)
AJPunkGirl95 chapter 15 . 7/29/2013
OMG like seriously Josh came back like NOT COOL. I'm scared for life like should I die cuz I know you're going to kill me no matter what LOL hopefully not. It needed more sex. Three on One definitely. You know that's what drives me. She needs to talk back more and get her ass handed to her HAHA I'm crazy like that.
Former RingRat chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Interesting concept but the extreme overuse of the word, you, would can only rate as a "Nice Try".
AJPunkGirl95 chapter 14 . 7/24/2013
WTF Roman like why you had to yell at her? He ruined everyone's night. Dean will get her back inside. She can't stay out there forever lol. And I want more three on one action. Make them punish her from running away haha. All will be good then. ;)
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