detailed, good job, I could feel the flow ;)

It's been a while since I've read a good yaoi fic.

What I loved most about it is how you managed to keep them both in character so well, how you managed to make it seem effortless, when it's actually so difficult (mainly because of Sasuke, because honestly, I can see Orochimaru doing all this and more, ha ha).

Good job and thank you for writing this!

I really liked. Very well described and the best part is that you didn't turn Sasuke into an annoying effeminate and submissive character, nor Orochimaru into a irrational perverted. Great story. Thanks for sharing.

Make more please

Whooooo that was good, can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

Oooooooooooo

Oh yeah. Orochimaru was all about the training, but I feel like he wasn't as diligent as he could have been. He must have been slacking on that training, but then again Sasuke seemed exhausted so who can say? XD Yes. An innocent story of training. Nice.

I'm so happy you continued and wrote a new chapter! I love your writing, its beautiful and hot in both their desperation and obsessions. Sasukes with power and Orochimarus with Sasuke. But I also really love Sasukes conflicting feelings with simply doing this as a trade for power and sasuke realizing he's actually enjoying it! Super hot! X3 and the small instances where the two show a glimmer of genuine care for the other are perfect and heartwarming. Great great job, can't wait for another chapter (even if I have to wait another year ;))

You did a great job keeping them in character and it was unbelievably hot! How you described Orochimarus obsession with sasukes body and sasukes stubborn reluctance despite enjoying it...marvelous! Id love to see this continued but its been over a year so I dont think thats happening! XD great piece though!

Too cutex

*perverted face*
I enjoyed that.
So much.
I love how Sasuke was just going "power power" with his so very IC resistance against Orochimaru and ended up succumbing to ze pleasure anyhow. Ohohohoho.
And I extremely understand your hatred for OOCness, and I'm really happy about that. We share the same sentiment. And I could feel the ICness rolling in this fic. I love how you kept Orochi his creepy self and Sasuke power obsessive. It all ended up being really delightfully hot ohohoho.
I enjoyed it. Very hard.
Thanks for writing so brilliantly Author-san!

wow so hot, amazing sex and orochi and sasu is both very hot in here.

Love it! Please write another chapter! :))

Hot. This pairing is a guilty pleasure of mine and it was really well written. You did a great job keeping them as in-character as possible. It was excellent!
I hope Orochimaru gets his "next time" because I'd definitely read it. ;)

Although I'm not a fan of OroSasu, a fan art piece that I came across made me want to look for a fic. I am so glad I came across yours; I loved every moment of it. I like how you kept them in character throughout this fic, because to me, this is the perfect portrayal of how Orochimaru felt about Sasuke. Well, that's how I viewed it watching the show, anyways (it could have been there subliminally, right?)

Your use of description and detail was brilliant; I was able to feel Orochimaru's lust and Sasuke's reluctance which made me shiver throughout reading. The lemon was excellent as well; it wasn't raunchy or distasteful, and it's a major plus for me when sex scenes are written with how the characters are feeling and what is going through their head as opposed to what they're actually doing so much. (Although, we all have PWPs, and they're fine in moderation.)

In other words, very well done!