This is very good. I have been looking for a good Black Widow S.H.I.E.L.D origin story for ages now. I'm glad you went back to when they were still teenagers. I hope you come up with more impressive ideas like hostage situations or undercover work. (Disguises, lol)

This is such an amazing story, I knew as soon as I started reading that I wouldn't be able to put it down for another two hours, so I literally read for two hours straight while my friends eyed me suspiciously. I swear, I was late to filming because of this. Overall, I loved it.

Natalia Alinova Romanova was born in 1928, ten years after Steve Rogers. She was injected a varyation of the super solider that Steve got. She's Russian, but can speak over 15 different languages. Clint Barton brought her to SHIELD when he was about 20. Bobbi Morse is Mocking Bird, the hero, and works for SHIELD. If you got some of your information from CATWS, Zola stated that she was born in 1985. He's wrong. Other than that, it's fine.

Though I prefer Romanogers, like the comic books, I am growing on Clintasha.
I hope you appresiate my info, but I understand you've morphed it to fit your imagination.

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Great story I really enjoyed it.

Oh I tested up when she went to visit Coulson! Such a beautiful scene. Great chapter.

I really love the story and how you have a jelous Natasha and a lying Clint. The only thing I don't like is how they are ignoring each other one moment and comforting each other the next with out Natasha getting mad at Clint for only paying attention to her when they're alone. I feel like Natasha should've scolded him for that a long time ago. Also, the way you quoted the Avengers movie didn't for with the characters. Natasha and Clibt hadn't seen each other since her abrupt disappearance and then they talked like they'd seen each other just the week before. You just need to be consistent with how you develop your characters and your story will be perfect. It's really great and I just couldn't wait to review. :)

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OK That got me teary eyed. Overall this has been a really good story. However, I am going suggest you find a beta. There's a BUNCH of misspelled or incorrectly used words.

Once again tho, the story is great.

Shouldn't he be 20 years old in here?

this just literally made me cry!

liked it but you got some dialogue wrong. and I only know this because I have seen the avengers so many times that I have memorized it.

OMG that's so sad

wow . . . okay definitely unexpected . . .