Reviews for Jewel Tones |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's actually Allah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() Somewhere in the second movie, I believe he prays TO Allah |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sweet ending! Sequel maybe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() For any who actually read the reviews, this is the writer of this story. My original account was shut down for some reason. The sequel to this story is going to be on my new account. If you need to find it, it is going to be called Jewel Tones:Part Two. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, just found your story here. I'm kinda interested in Jeweli- she seems...firey. :D Though my god, she just bit Ardeth's head off with that "have faith" thing. Wow. Yup- firey. |
![]() ![]() This is an AWESOME STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aside from spelling errors I find this an interesting beginning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you ever going to continue? I hope so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Horus is adorable. I love him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So no kids for little Jeweli. Aww. Makes me sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story a lot. |
![]() ![]() Good story so far, apart from your dreadful spelling. Just one thing though - it was 1933 when they battled against Lock-Nah and the Scorpion King. The first Mary Poppins book wasn't published until 1934 and in none of the books (which I have read and own) was the word "Supercalifragilisticexpialidocius" mentioned. This was actually a song that was written for the Walt Disney film made in the 1960s. As for the Medjai, they worship Allah - they are Muslims - but they respect the old religion and are duty bound to protect the relics that are contained in the Egyptian temples and tombs, particularly from idiots like Evy O'Connell who foolishly read from the Book of the Dead and was responsible for raising Imhotep. |