The dove chases the griffin.

How ironic. Kaito as a magician uses doves while griffins represent truth. Wonder who that could be?

I haven't read that story so I couldn't really get the meaning behind the lines the said but I think it's pretty good 3

Cool

Oh my god sdhfjklgh that was a wild ride. And damn am I happy they got together at the end of it. BUT WHAT HAPPENED WITH AOKO AND HAKUBA

ooohh that was a nice idea, the twist on the play
and well executed too!

My heart bleeds, yours were the words that cut it.

This was a great story and I love how you wrote Ran in here. Good job!

The presentation in front of the class was so heartbreaking... but this entire story was really nice and the end cute. :)

The feel from one of my fav OTP with my fav Shakespear work, thank you Luna :)

I found this fanfiction very interesting and i loved the writing style and the story! Oh I loved how at the end Shinichi told kaito that he tasted good & the blush that kaito had! KYAH

This is so cute. Kaito is so adorable, and I loved the entire thing. I don't actually know A Midsummer Nights Dream, but it seems like if he had actually been in the fic, Eisuke could have been Lysander ;) maybe. I don't know. But this was great ;D

If I remember it correctly, 'Kudou' and 'Kuroba' isn't that close. The character 'ro' is one of 'main' hiragana, while 'do' is 'to' with tenten addition. Well, considering that their classmates fill the 'ku' name completely.

...This makes me hate A Midsummer Night's Dream a little less.
But only a little. The trauma of a bad teacher and horrific amounts of homework cannot be undone with just a single fanfic, no matter the fact it has my favorite DC/MK couple in it. I DID like the fanfic though. :D

I thought it was really good :)

hey i think you did pretty well, i know a midsummer might's dream and it was a good interpretation of of it