Reviews for Inappropriate Touching
JojoJinx chapter 27 . 6/23
I don't really understand this ending to be honest but as you are the author and it's your creative decision I will respect it. I don't neccesairily want to kill Alice anymore but I would love for Bella to get more of a chance to yell at Alice...put her in her place and make Alice gobsmacked and them maybe slam a door in her face or hang up on her. Oooooh or set Rose on Alice...or Dr Cullen. It's sad that Carlisle never met Esme before she died.
Finally this story has made me worried and feel for all those struggling with OCD that struggles with the thought of germs and infection (I know not all people with OCD fear germs...though I bet it's still tricky with routine changes and stuff) during this time of corona virus being all over the news and a concern to everyone.
JojoJinx chapter 7 . 6/22
Such a beautiful letter Edward. Bella will consider him her soulmate as soon as she reads about his respect for 18th century gloves...although she might be sad they're not latex :D
JojoJinx chapter 6 . 6/22
Can we murder Alice? Pretty pretty please. Maybe slap Angela a little too? Both Bella and Edward's illnesses remind me almost a bit of a coma. Like they are both trapped unable to get out.
JojoJinx chapter 3 . 6/22
I know you described this as a romantic comedy but so far I find it unbearably sad and pretty heartbreaking. I can't stop crying.
Moonlight4me chapter 27 . 4/28
I absolutly love this story. It is so sweet and funny.
JojoJinx chapter 1 . 4/18
little green brought me here
entity1127 chapter 27 . 11/15/2019
I read your story, and I didn't think it was for me. But it pulled me in and refused to let me go until the end. This si truly a great story and I appreciate you sharing with me.
Guest chapter 27 . 9/10/2019
The ending was rather abrupt, nevertheless I absolutely loved this story - thank you for sharing it.
anaya420 chapter 27 . 8/16/2019
Wait what? That ending was so fast. :(
Nicoconsd chapter 27 . 8/13/2019
Wow... I was not expecting that ending. I'm glad Bella was brave and strong but I would have loved to hear what Edward said after he closed that door... Even if it was just I love you and kissed her... But that being said this was a fun journey. I have to admit it got me thinking of many times I wanted to wash my hands after touching something... lol But thank you for the fun ride. :)
Caroleg chapter 27 . 1/24/2019
Loved it
Guest chapter 15 . 5/15/2018
So Bella doesn't really have a social disorder? Shes acting pretty fucking normal in chapter 15
Guest chapter 14 . 5/15/2018
That phone shit was gross. Just straight up not right. Bella was fake as hell.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/15/2018
Alice and Jaspers povs and even the parts they play in this story are completely worthless to me. Nothing but as annoyance.
Firechaseswater chapter 27 . 4/11/2018
LOVE THIS STORY BUT LEMONS WERE A DAMN LIE
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