Ahhhhhhhhhh I love it so much...Even though I’m an hardcore NaruHina fan, oh man I kinda feel bad for reading it now but anyways when I start reading it I just couldn’t bring myself to stop. Some of the parts had me cracking...It was so freaking funny, dark, possessive hehe just the way I like it . I liked it so much that I literally slept at 3:36 am and I wanted to know the ending so badly. Thank you Author chan for writing such a fantastic story for us, Loved your work c:

amusing!

Great story!

Hiashi needs to get that stick out of his ass and stop being a jerk.

Am glad that hinata admitted she is in love with Sasuke.

Sakura got what she deserved for what she did to hinata.

Loved it!

Ok. I can't read this anymore.

The writing? Perfect
The plot itself? Not at all

This dude comes up to her randomly at a party and tells her to "never stray away".

From what!?

They've never talked beforehand and all of a sudden she's obliged to listen to the douchebag?

He then attacks her and then arrives at her house, forces himself on to her, and starts touching her body WITHOUT CONSENT and then she's PERFECTLY ok with meeting up with him.

AND THAG HAPPENS IN LESS THAN 24 HOURS!

They train and she gets injured and while she's in her hospital bed, INJURED and wrapped in bandages, he starts kissing her AGAIN WITHOUT HER CONSENT! He removes her bandages and leaves her top completely bare and continues to force himself onto her.

Like what!

And somehow-somehow! She starts liking him for totally unreasonable reasons! The beginning of their "relationship" screams abusive and the rest of it has stupid written all over itself.

Think of this in a real life scenario. It's not cute, It's not cool, and altough it's steamy, it ain't hot.

(My gosh, I didn't know I was this upset about it and that's probably because I chose to ignore it but the "chemistry" is so stupid! But to each their own)
I don't know whether or not you'll delete this. My cionstructive criticism is usually a lot more, ya know, constructive but this made me so upset

Well damn, this was dark.

PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE IF GOD PLEASE MAKE A PART2 TO THIS FANFIC. PLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEE! I'M BEGGING YOU. PLEEAAAAAASSSSEEE.

And you can see him softening towards the end, in a very realistic, in character way
So kudos! You’re a brilliant writer :)

Hey love the story!
I wish Sasuke was a little nicer to everyone
But I guess this is a more realistic him considering everything he’s gone through at the end of the war.
Also I don’t support abusive relationships even in fics but you made it believable that it’s the kind of tough love Hinata needed to grow, they are shinobi after all not regular people. Beatings from the ones they love are part of the package

I cant find rhe sequel :'(

I like it that they have sex alot. Sex is bonding ! (Im cancer in zodiac so its like a reason why i see sex as bonding)

This is one of my favorite stories and I wish I could find the sequel!