This story was a great read, you're very creative.

Hurry uppu!

I have to admit I didn't see that coming from Emiri, dang!

Okay, making them go to the "Disappearance of Yuki Nagato Chan" world was a nice touch~!

I can see Haruhi in a suit and dark glasses going "We're getting the band back together again" or "We're on a mission from God". She could even have a cop car.

Why do I get the feeling Kyon was dead before they ever set out on their journey? Either that or he's off doing a high-pressure job (like bomb disposal, running a pyramid scheme or suicide hotline) and wondering why it's nowhere near as exciting as his highschool days.

This is a little difficult to read. There's something about the way the dialog was done once there was... 4 or 5 people in the scene? It was too disconcerting for some reason, maybe there was a lot of "stuff going on" but not much happening, if that makes sense?

Also... who are these characters? Ryoko and Kimidori I can understand being mostly blank slates, but Yuki? Who is this really? No one changes that much, not even autistic robot girls who suddenly become human or something.

nice little chapter to keep things in perspective and keep us involved with the story curious to see how you end this but hope its not rushed. untill next time stay in good health and have fun writing

Excellent chapter, worth the wait. :)

I too am curious "who the father is".

Some great introspection from the Narrator here. Maybe the best inner monologue of the fic, so far.

i have a special hate in my heart for authors that leave such pain staking cliff hangers ohhhhhh i could kill someone but i guess ill suffice with leaving a review saying i love this and how it not kyon and computer captain has someone to love but its at risk and just everything but i need more please for the love of all that is fictional update soon

Welp, this story is super depressing. I knew she had something like that, though I didn't think it would be so blunt. And the fact that Yuki is pretty much the one doing it is the most concerning of all of it.

Finally, Mikuru! Pretty sure, according to Haruhi Canon, Mikuru and Fujiwara are actual brother and sister, but I could be remembering incorrectly.

Ryoko's death scene was... really difficult to read. You're doing a good job keeping the drama going here and I feel like the quality of your writing is improving as well. This fic is much more interesting than what it started out as.

sorry the link didn't get posted lol

art/Thinking-Yuki-Nagto-478944001

Great story so far and loved Ryoko's view of Haruhi (Personally as a Christian its nice to see someone state she is not God but is special. A view I always had.)
Here is some fan art I created based on Yuki in chapter 12 (Minus her hat as I can't draw hats lol) Keep up the great work.