Father time lit killed my vibe

fucking shit

this chapter always make me cry

I wish this story would continue! No offense, but I don’t feel like reading a whole reboot. I liked this story and where it was going. Too bad it’s over

A wild Vali has appeared!

shit

Cosmic entity conroling others from behind the scenes i say fuck it i'm dropping this novel. There is nothing that i hate more then controling bastard entities that play with memories/minds of characters, i must refuse to read shit like that.

I like how time traveling didn't come with only happiness

It's good. I wouldn't really think you're a novice English speaker while reading it.

Darn you got a wonderful story and you discontinued it. I only hope you can update this story for us.

This just went form 0 to 100 quickly XD
I'm hooked. (luv plot like these). Tho I still hope Akeno didn't remember her "dream"...

You kinda "rushed" their remembering here. It's a real pity Akeno didn't meet Issei again before getting her memories back. And going by how you did the enitre Issei x Akeno thing, it actually woud've been waaay better if Akeno didn't remember anything from her past-future life. You kinda ruined it here...for me at least. I don't care if his friends remember him, or even the girls, but only if they didn't interact. I'm okay with Irina remembering since, well, you didn't really develop it between them, just a kiss on the cheek and bye gonna marry ya later, but with Akeno it's different. You kinda ruined the entire developement she had with Issei when she remembered. Issei is not anymore that innocent childhood first love, and you could've developed this even further with the "Oh my fisrt crush appeared but he dosen't remember me anymore since I removed his memories what should I do aaaaaah".

Wow if I wrote that much then I must've really expected that...damn if only I read this chapter later...

Anyway still good till now...T_T

This is very dissapointing. Everything is perfect until you decide to introduce father time and the stupidly unnecessary curse. I have read everything till chapter 22, and here is my advice, rewrite everything after the success of the ki changing treatment. Make issei and co met the ORC member at kyoto along with the newly revive shuri and baraqiel at the same time. From there let Akeno remember her past life, followed by the rest of the ORC and kept Rias the last.

Father Time killed the story for me with that curse. It was great before that, but the punishment doesn’t really fit in comparison to Ophis.

I do not understand how your writing has gotten progressively worse as I've read more.