It was good but you spelled exact with a k and Harry constantly screaming his pleasure was a bit much. Replacing some of the screams with moans or grunts would make your story sound more real.

Wow great story Plesae write a another one!

sequel?

Fjweijfowjfowiejf there need to be more Theo/Harry fics :3
You did a wonderful job! I love it! I look forward to more form you!