Well want to tell you daemon will still be first of his name even if he is king because he not targaryen he is blackfyre

Actually, the whole "First of his Name" thing only applies to people who are King. Daemon Targaryen wasn't a King, or else Aegon the Conqueror would be the Gods-only-know-how-many-th of his name, cause there were alot of Aegon's before him.

I think it should be the Third of your Name since the second Daemon Targaryen was the husband of Queen Rhaenyra Targaryen and the father of both Viserys II and Aegon III.

Sorry guys. I took a break from this, but I'm gonna start writing on it again

So far I really liked this. Great idea, especially appreciated my me, because I really like Blackfyres and the idea of their rebellion :-) looking forward to next chapter !

sry about some spelling errors. I type quite fast and sometimes I somehow manage to press the same keys too many or too few times.

You cannot imagine how I love you... An another pre-GOT story! And it seems that I'm no longer the only pro-blackfyre here! And it is pleasant to read :)

Just one thing... I'm not sure about the "Daemon second of his name"... I think this apply only when kings are concerned and I think that the only other Daemon we know about was a Velaryon...

ANyway, I'm really looking forwards reading next chapters!