Please say that you will continue this story...I absolutely love this!
Your characters are very interesting and I'm curious to know what comes next.
Yuki

Are you adverse to constructive criticism? If you are, that's ok... I was just thinking, maybe you should ease up on the details a little bit. Every thing doesn't need to be described to the letter, usually a sentence or two will do it, and a paragraph or more isn't usually necessary, unless you're describing an object or place central to the story.
Otherwise, I think this is a cool concept.

I Like, I lust, I love!Please Update Soon!

I like where you're going with this.

I like! Keep going! :)