Ok. I'm not gonna front on you or sugar coat. This OC of yours is a fucking Mary Sue! Like for real! This bitch knows how to cook any fucking meal, clean, fucking fight, professional athlete, USE A FUCKING GUN! What the fuck is that?! That ain't cool mah girl...

Please update soon this fanfic is really good.

I love that part xD game recognize game Grandad and you lookin-kinda-unfamiliar right now XD

Im going to stop reading, because i thought you were gonna put originality in this story, but now i see its just gonna be recaps of old episodes. Which is pointless and waste of time writing.

Hold up, btw they were in the den

I dont even know why gwen cares about cristal, that's not gwen house, plus how is her aunt so irresponsible to leave gwen with people she hardly know.

I dont really like how you added gwen in the,conversation.

Honestly, this one did make her mary sue. Since she can cook like this at a young age. Now just because im pointing out small mistakes and criticism doesnt mean i dont like story, i love it. I like to review stories carefully and point out things the author can work i didn't like story, i wouldn't be reading it now would i.

Honestly this chapter wasn't half bad.

Now she is like a mary sue

Honestly, i like your story kind of, but i feel its too predictable that huey and gwen would sit together. Which makes her and the story mary sue but ima keep reading.

I think riley would be walking with them also, please dont make this a story mainly about huey and gwen, give other characters so main scenes, or may just have to stop reading :/

Hey this is a really good story keep writing please

Hey I hope you update soon! I read all the chapters so far in 2 days. I really hope you continue writing this fanfic!

Good beginning.