Dean, how can you do that to her

I actually liked this spin off way better than the original story. Way more action and more intense feelings all the way through.

That was good. Nice serves.

Aww my heart broke multiple times reading this! Dean & Shannon are two peas in a pod, too alike for their own good, but I'm glad that they both came to their senses in the end (although Shannon was clearly miles ahead than Dean!)

I did feel for Gavin though. But surely Shannon would have eaten him alive in the end?!

And finally, this Ambrose smut... Damn! Seriously hot. Like oh my god I'm about to burst into flames hot.

Really hope there's more Dean & Shannon to come...!

Thank God she chose Dean, I was actually scared that she would choose that idiot Gavin! I did not like that dick.

I really loved ho you wrote Dean in this story. How he was so terrified of having feelings but they just kept coming through.

Shannon was a great OC. I really liked her and felt for her.

Your writing is excellent! Ii really hope you write a sequel for this :) one day maybe.

I'm one chapter in and Ii already love this. Thankyou for following my story otherwise Ii would have never have found this!

Just finished this one literal seconds ago and if I thought the first story was hell...this was beyond.

While I love Dean to death. I really do. I wanted to kick the ever living shit out of him for how he treated this woman in here. She didn't deserve a lick of any of this. All she was guilty of was loving this dumb dumb man and he was too much of a coward to act right and instead tear and break this woman apart. But you know what...I was intrigued and the more I read the story...the more I was falling in love with the couple that is Dean and Shannon. They truly are a mess...but they're each other's mess.

You can't help who you fall in love with and this story is a big example of that and I'm glad...I am so glad this all worked out for them in the end because...while I liked Gavin, I really did, he wasn't the one who held Shannon's heart. Never would have. He's a great friend and he deserves someone that will cherish him and only him. Poor guy. But god! I can't help but be happy! Our couple made it! They made it!

This was worse than a roller coaster. It killed me. I wanted to punch my screen so much and I was crying and gritting my teeth...shit...

Good job on this one. This is a masterpiece. Wow. Just wow. The smut, the emotions you invoked, just everything. Wow.

Just rereading and roman's side note for his kids just rebroke my heart.

Can we have more please? I know your writing about Roman and Karo but I want MORE DEAN AND SHANNON! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE?

yay! she picked dean ... i'm sooo happy :)

Glad he finally woke up. Sucks for Gavin, but I'm glad Dean opened his eyes before it was too late.

I never thought Dean was going to make his way back to Shannon!

It was such a sweet thing and he really does love her - even if he can't say it just yet.

I'm hoping eventually he does say it!

This was such a great story! I loved it from chapter 1 to the end!

Thank you for sharing it!

I love looove this! Can't help but feel a bit bad for Gavin, but not too bad. She belongs with Dean! Your an amazing writer and I can't wait for your next story! I love Roman and Karo. So excited!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHH FUCK.

FUCK FUCK FUCK.

MY HEART IS DOING SO MANY FUCKING THINGS RIGHT NOW AND IT HURTS BUT IT'S HAPPY AND OH GOD.

GAVIN. MY BABY. I MADE HIM. AND HIS HEART HURTS. OH GOD. TT_TT

DEAN. YOU FUCKING SHMUCK-Y ASSHOLE. HATE YOU. SO MUCH. RIGHT NOW.

fucking fuck fuck fuck fuck.

Can't stand to see this story end. It hurts my heart to know that I won't have Deannon around anymore- OH WAIT. We show up in the next sequel. Duuuh, I'm an idiot. XD

BUT WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
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Critique time:

Beautiful. Simply perfect. And oh lord, you're so good at writing now. It's pissing me off, how good you are! It just irritates me. You're so good at writing and uuuuuuuuuuuuuugh.

You've come so far, Christina. With grammar, writing, flow and even your smut scenes are more amazing than before.

It was so easy to imagine this all in my head and oh lord, you've put everything together so pefectly! Felt like I was watching a chick flick, honestly. But a good one! love you, babe! I love you and your writing and your face and EVERYTHING!

Can't wait to read the sequel to PPMFI ;3 EVEN THOUGH I ALREADY KNOW WHAT IT'S ABOUT BUT UUUGHHH I MISSED ROMALINA TOO.

Oh, you didn't really put this story as COMPLETE either, babe. You might wanna do that. ;)

I can't help myself to feel bad for Gavin. :'-(

It was a great story! I can't wait to read the sequel to your other story! :-)