Yes I do want an epilogue with them all grown up with their children and all but I have one more request.I also want shane to be recognised and live happily with her husband,sister and her would a more appropriate ending according to me.I think at least the group should know that she is alive. I really would appreciate it if u could make an epilogue like consider my idea, i think it's ...plz..make an epilogue with my request...idk why but I feel really sad for Shane(even though I know this is fiction bt I just can't stop myself) plz do it...:)
And by the way this was an awesome fanfic. Haven't read something like this for some is great.U more like this.

You can definitely write but there are better ways to make your characters learn stuff instead lazily putting down: "Has a secret."

Why on earth would a school folder say that? It doesn't make sense and is just terrible writing.

Why is it for the best that Shane's sisters don't know she's alive? How does ignorance of her survival benefit them? Are people looking for her? Would knowledge of her survival put them in danger? Why did she never contact them? I feel like you left a few questions unanswered here. It's like you left something out of the story. The ending was good, but it leaves something to be desired. You also need to work on your grammar. While your grammer is far better than that of so,e of the other authors on this site, there are still a few typos, and in some places it's hard to tell which of the characters is speaking. You might want to work on that. Still, overall, it was a good story. Nicely done!

Very interesting. Well done, but the ending leaves a few unaswered questions. An epilogue would be nice.

wow! thanks for finishing it. This was a really good surprise but im a bit confused on what happened to Shane? Shes pregnant with some random guys baby who found her in the rubble? how old even is she - i couldnt imagine shane being old enough to have a kid - and how old does that make the others? reply soon x Good storyline though! Write more assassin stories? or rich kid stories? Or even better a story about may,mist,dawn,leaf sighning up for an boys school to do soething maybe and then they meet the boys? Surprise us!

Beginning note: hey, you changed your pen name!
Beginning A/N: wow.
Chapter review: oh holy moly. Shane LIVED?! ...DID VOLKNER?!

I wish Alpha still existed. Also I knew that was Shane and did she end up with V? I like the part of the ribbons! Yes I totally want an epilogue and I think there should be at least one more meet up. To let them know she is ALIVE but at the same time Im I'm not sure what their reactions would be. I'm glad I was here for the ending! If you do the epilogue then Update soon! If not I'm glad this had a happy ending! :)

Julie Togepi

Beginning note: I really have enjoyed this story and I'll mark it as a favorite, if I haven't already.
Chapter review: That's great that Shane is okay now! "Yes Dawn. I love you too..." and "Dawn! Damn, you troublesome girl," are my favorite lines by Paul so far!

RESET the world? Volkner, you are one twisted dude.

Eagle

PS Do you plan on writing any more Pokemon fics?

great chapter! also, Pokemon GO is the best thing ever w

Amazing! It was cool and creepy. Update soon! :)

It is a Deering not a deer deerling. I HATE WHEN PEOPLE GET PERFECT POKEMON WRONG!

Beginning A/N: I'm pretty sure I've added this to my favorites list. *smacks you on the back of your head* I LOVE THIS FIC! It's crazy, romantic and just a different AU.
Chapter review: I LOVE Leaf's idea! ...I wonder who that was at the end. Crazy chapter, but I LOVED it.
Eagle.

PS I'm QUEENSPELLER67, in case you're wondering. I've liked this fic because like I said in the beginning, it's crazy, romantic and different. Also, sorry for smacking you on the back of your head.

The action was amazing! I really hope you passed your exams! Update soon! :)

how much chapters left

Beginning A/N comment: don't worry about the late updates. I love this story anyway. What are you going to do when you're done with it?
Chapter review: Robin with an axe...that just scares me. Robin and Dax have a happy reunion so far. So I learned what Fire Emblem is. Sort of.

Eagle.