update please

Interesting premise, lacking execution. While I think the idea of Sasuke being an obsessive loon in an AU is a pretty cool plot, the essential points of this story really lack. Misspellings, incorrect grammar, and then what even of the personalities? Sakura's mom totally justifies and ignores the fact that she got kidnapped. The girl's being harassed and terrorized, not just "bullied because he likes her." Most people associate that with teasing, not all the close rape calls and manipulative emotional abuse he's busting on her. And then Sakura herself is a fucking case for being tough one second, then soft and taking it all the rest. She's too wishy-washy on her own without being a little more rational. It's one thing if Sasuke can rapidly tune deceit against her; at which case, I wouldn't be surprised if she were a little more giving. But she knows how fucked up he is here so it doesn't make a lot of sense.

The only way this could possibly work is if you write Sasuke to be a lot more charismatic and deceitful than he is, under the pretense of near-insanity or some trauma or whatever. Well thought out loons can charm the masses into anything, therefore it wouldn't be a longshot then to have Sakura act conflicted. As it stands, this is weak and unreasonable.

I literally laughed out loud when Itachi barged open the door

Oh, I am sorry about little miss typo (my review in chapter 11). English is not my first.
I mean, Do you mind to make more chapters until the end? For your loyal readers and the others.

Hello... I hope you read all of your reviews.
Well... Where are you? Where are the next chapters?
Would you mind to make more chapters until the end? For your loyal readers and the others.
I really hope you make it come true, as soon as possible.

Well, if that ain't emotional manipulation, idk what is. God, Sakura, you didn't really believe that Sasuke actually was a good person, didja? Sakura's mom sucks. She's totally downplaying her daughter being, essentially, kidnapped. What kind of mother DOES that? Plus, her daughter is naive and seems to move on from things strangely quickly.

... I'll keep going. I want to see where this leads.

Can't wait for more

This is like one of my fave fanfics right now! Loving crazy Sasuke XD

Happy New Year ( and late Christmas)! I really wonder how Sasuke will proceed, and I must say I was surprised to see Karin in the role of psychiatrist. Good job, keep it up!

lovin sasuke insane character, update soon!

Sasuke was the same old same old to me. Just more confused and more cranky. Hmm I would think u would be 15 like me or 20 or 18.

I had read this storyy loooong before and now found it again! . It's awesome continueee

really surprised abt Karin but happy tht Sasuke still has a thing for Sakura, I really hope its near to love, anyways nice but it was too short. Plz update soon!

Yo he was just full of cold demeanor. One second he nice next he acting like a total physico path its hilarious.

whaaaaa you updated? lol jk AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME