Awesome story!

I enjoyed this! I think the battles were the best part. You remixed the OT and EU elements well and at times particularly creatively. (The Noghri's part in the Death Star assault stands out as an example.) I am still curious what happened with some of the subplots, such as the further integration of the former imperials with the rebels and how the new government avoids the problems of both the Old Republic and the Empire, but the story is satisfying as it stands.

great story and a good read. not a lot of good Vader and Leia fanfic

Dead Han?
Yay!

A nice read, thank you.
Borys

I'd had loved Force-Choke Leia :)
But still satisfying.
Borys

Vader tip-toeing around the D-Bomb :)
Borys

Enjoying the read so far.
Borys

Most readers are here for Vader, not some random upstarts we don't know. You barely made it clear that these guys are imperial defects. Or are they? I can't tell AT ALL

Still a brilliant story, though, and your style has improved quite a bit. Grammar is still terrible, though.

Hi.
No offence, but you really should improve your writing style. The story and idea is amazing, but the way you write it down is less so.
Like, instead of saying "usually such a sight would have been pretty" it would be far better if you wrote this: "usually, such a display would have been breathtaking."
See what I'm saying?
There is nothing overly wrong with your writing, other than using grammar and punctuation incorrectly (sorry, but it's true), you just need to read more GOOD and well written examples to improve (that's how I got my writing style). Also, going through it after you've written it - a day later works for me - would improve the quality of your work drastically.

I am a fanfic writer myself (I couldn't be bothered to log in), so you can check out my stories if you want, or pm me if you need any help.
I would also like to recommend that you revamp this story - you will get far more reviews that way and this story has a lot of potential that I can see, even from just two chapters!

Palatine seems a bit OOC, though...

Welp! I'm done being patronising now!

First half of this chapter: "OH NO! Everything's going wrong! Poor Leia D: "
Second half: "Wait, is this intrigue? I smell intrigue!"
This story definitely sucked me in quick. Your excellent grammar and spelling, as well as your close attention to detail and ability to portray difficulty and tragedy realistically make this story a very engaging read.

I want to know what happened with Thrawn, or why he was mentioned at all... or that strange scene with the unrevealed man trying to create a schism between the aliens and the alliance because if vader being involved. unresolved plot threads are killing me!

LOL! Good, kill the Ewoks! #EwokWarCrimes (Okay, I have an issue.) I have to admit, this is a what-if I haven't read before. Enjoying it so far...

The road to Hell is paved with good intentions.

This was an interesting take. I enjoyed reading it!