I am loving this story

I hope Ed dies of his wounds...Is this a ZA story?

Absolulty love love this

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I really enjoyed this story! I really did! One of my favorite parts was when Carol was drunk lol that was hilarious. Anyways, great story! Hope you keep making more :)!

Lovely Caryl cover in non ZA world.
Loves their interactions throughout the story. The smuts is hot, albeit a bit repetitive (excluding the tantra episode).
Despite typos, the story is wrapping good.
Less dark and horror came without gory details than I expected.
Lastly, thank you for writing and sharing this.

Wow! That was great! I have to admit, I was not sure at first how I would react to taking the characters I love so much out of the familiar enviornment of TWD and placing them into a "real world" scenario, but, I found myself getting into the story and loving it. You are really talented...ever thought about publishing? I think the fan base is there, and I know you have followers, you should give it some serious thought :) Anyway, back to the review...
You already know how I feel about Caryl, LOL, I guess I would not be here if I did not LOVE them, but I want to share my thoughts on METH. To begin with, I share your opinion about Beth, she IS weird. Even after seeing season 4, and the stories TWD created with her and Daryl, I still don't ever see those two becoming a couple. Sure, they had some semi intimate moments, but that is to be expected in a life or death situation like they have been thrust into. Anyone would bond with another person that had just saved their life, it's human nature. That does not mean that they would fall madly in love...Daryl is not that type of man. I could see him being protective of her, maybe even having "feelings" for her, but love? I think not. Carol had already gotten under his skin and into his heart, and Daryl is a VERY loyal person. He would not give up on Carol so easily, no way! So, as far as a BETHYL couple...well, it ain't gonna happen. Nuff said. Putting Beth with Meryl, or Rick, or any of the men in TWD just does not seem probable to me, as much as she has grown into her own person...they still see the immature, frightened child she was on the farm, and the cold, shut down bitch she became at the prison. Besides, now she's gone...and, out of sight, out of mind! She'll hook up with someone else in her new group anyway, she's fickle like that. With Hershal gone, I say "good riddance" Beth. Maggie and Glenn are back together now, and Daryl WILL find Carol again. When he does, he will remember his love for her, and all will be right again. Season 5 will be their season, I think, and it's about damn time! You know this as well as I do..and the fans seem to be rooting for this too, so I have faith that the reunion of CARYL will be an intense plotline with a happy ending. As happy as one can be in the hellish world of the Walking Dead, anyway. It was refreshing to see those two in a different world, a normal world, making their way to each other thru all the obstacles thrown in their path...and winning! Sharing a married life, having children, all the stuff that couples go thru on a daily basis was very familiar to me...it's my world too...and I thoroughly enjoyed reading the steamy parts! Whew! You are REALLY good at that stuff, LOL, I was in "cold shower" mode when I finished those parts, and down a pack of smokes. All I can say is DAMN GIRL, you have got it pegged! I cannot wait till you put out another story in this timeline, I will be reading it in one sitting, like I did the others you have written, you are too good to put down and I find myself wanting more, more, MORE. PLEASE! I am recommending these stories to anyone who loves CARYL, they are highly enjoyable, easy to read, and, now here's the best part, FREE to all. WooHoo! I LOVE the stories...CARYL ON!

One more thing...I'm a southern gal, Alabama born and bred, and I speak my mind. Not ashamed of it either, so when I have something to say I say it signed in and unafraid. I don't know if these are posted, or just for the Author's benefit, and really don't care. I'm not writing it to please anyone, OR piss anyone off, it's simply my opinion! So, if honesty is what you want, you are gonna get it from me 100%...just remember, you asked for it! Caryl forever!️️️

Ok. I have been silent until now because I LOVE Caryl, and ALL the writers that sail this ship...and because I am saving my review of this story until the ending. Previously, I reviewed each chapter as I read it, but, I found that I was being repetitive and not giving the Author my best...and she deserves my best since that is what she gives me. Having said that...this is for the Haters. SCREW ALL YOU TROLLS. THINK YOU CAN DO A BETTER JOB? Then do it, have the balls to post it, and let me review YOU. This is not as easy as you may think, and the Authors put time, sweat, heart and tears into each story...then post it for the entire world to judge. So have a little respect for that, at least...if you don't like Caryl, fine. That's your call. You are idiots, but hey, whatever floats your boat. Just stay the hell away from mine! Caryl is AWESOME, and the stories and writers are AWESOME, so just go away already, stick your heads back up your asses, and STFU!

Why didn't Merle get the plates number from the shop and to not share Axles name with the cops is plain stupid. Merle wasted awhile night waiting for Rodney to call back, the cops would have been to Rodney's house ASAP to get the info on Axle. Again that baby is going to be born with deficits.

I think it's the step dad, poor carols baby being tortured and beyond scared will probably harm her fetus.

You know u r one lf my favourite authors! This is the third or fourth story ive read of yours and as always i LOVED IT! Amazing story, it was perfect in every sense! The meth was adorable without being to cheesy for Merle. And the caryl was just exactly how i imagined it would be. Another amazing story! Excellent work!

I found your story! This will take me awhile to read.

The feels! I love this chapter so much.

I loved this! Daryl n Carol are my faves! Very good job on the story couldnt tear myself away from it.