Incredible characterization. I so hope that you write more!

I don't know what to write here, you know you're good, you know this is a brilliant look into Yuki and Yuki's Kyon, and you should know I'm loving every word. the way you incorporate the title, how the language is just as technical as it should be but doesn't become confusing jargon, all of it is wonderful. great work!

thank you for rewriting this and for writing it so damn well. I like how cold and medical so much of the language is, and that you still somehow give Yuki heart. everything about this was pitch-perfect and beautifully evocative. can't wait to read more!