Wow. That was beautiful :)

Amazing work. Absolutely amazing, I forget how much I love Wolfstar as well, since I haven't read that in what feels like forever. You characterised both Remus and Sirius so so well, perfectly even. So much feels as well, the way you portray Remus' feelings just - ah feels - so many feels. Brilliantly done although there are a couple of typos I spotted but nothing major . X

This is so fantastically written and there are so many good lines in it. I love the way you weave past and present together to tell a story that ends BEFORE OotP. :) There are a few typos and grammar things throughout, but they weren't distracting and I found myself engrossed in their story. Fantastic work.

Sophy.
SophySophySophy.
Doing such things to my heart is not a good thing.

This.
This piece is fabulous.

The way you've written their story through Remus' thoughts and the flashbacks, and perfect self-sacrificing nature of Remus and the moment where Remus is sure Sirius betrayed them all and the SHEER PERFECTION of this entire thing.
I do not have words.
You have made me forget how to English Sophy.

[Sirius still tastes like freedom, and that's all you've ever wanted.]
That line.
Why are you so perfect?

This is one of the best Wolfstar pieces I have ever read.
This is perfect.

This was a very nice take on the Sirius/Remus pairing.
I liked how it jumped from the past to the present. At times the transitions did get a little jumpy but it was well done nonetheless. You characterized all four of the Marauder's perfectly. I especially loved their banter! Remus and Sirius' first kiss was adorable and I loved Sirius in that section, very sweetly done! You wrote them beautifully.
Wonderful work!

I don't particularly like WolfStar, but this was lovely. You characterised both Sirius and Remus perfectly, and the second person style worked very well. I like the way you broke it up with the flashbacks, that was a nice way of building up their relationship. The scene where they found out that he was a werewolf was brilliantly done; Sirius and James' banter was perfect, and you wrote Remus' confusion and growing hope very well. I also like that you didn't go off on a tangent about Peter betraying them; a lot of writers do that and it just subtracts from the main theme, so I was very happy not to see it here. Great job overall, well done.

This was amazing! Although I did find it terribly hard to follow in the beginning between the past and present. But once that was over I found it really sweet and cute. I love how you included the boys finding out he was a werewolf and I love the mascot part. Great job! Keep writing!

Aahahahahahaha RIGHT IN THE FEELS.

Well done, Sophy! I am absolutely in love with Remus's development throughout the fic, and especially how he was prepared to kill Sirius if need be. But when he found out that Sirius was innocent, he was just so gosh darn happy that it made me want to cry. The way you formatted it so the dialogue was mostly in italics was really pretty, and it gave a sense of fondness to the memories/conversations.

"Sirius still tastes like freedom, and that's all you've ever wanted." -My absolute /favorite/ line. Not only does it give a sense of finality, but it's just beautiful because that's their relationship. *sob*

My only criticism would be that the title is a little bit longish. It's not really a big deal, just a bit much to say or think. (Could just be me :)) This is a great piece, and the length wasn't overwhelming at all, even though I thought it would be at first! The flow worked well-great job.

Allie

WHOA AMAZING :) OMG this was sososo amazing! :)
Let's start off with the fact that Sirius's 'horrible pun' was SO not horrible and VERY awesome indeed :)
Also, the second person was awesome. I am a sucker for second person, and you probably know that :P
Sirius's letter was so...ugh, I don't know...deep? Even though it was only like, three lines, it was so simple and angsty. Every single thing you write is so amazing, honestly, I have no idea how to choose my favourite line in this. Because, like, every line is my favourite line basically...
Here are a few of my favourite lines:
[You're on a roller-coaster that just keeps going down and down, and just when you think it can't get any lower, it does.]
[Sirius still tastes like freedom, and that's all you've ever wanted.]
[It's too damn early to get up] This is so me XD
I usually don't like long one shots, but um...yeah, this was an exception! :) I don't like wolfstar either, but again, this was an exception! :) You're so amazing :D (Ugh your hypnotism is working...)
The memories in between are really great. I love how the non-italic story still makes sense, though, if you read it alone without the flashbacks. One thing, though–perhaps ending with the current/present story rather than memories would've been better? Just a thought :)
This was brilliant, good job :)

I must admit, for the first entirely Wolfstar story I've read, I actually quite liked this one. Not enough to convince me to read more of them, but only because the pairing holds no interest for me. This is a very well-written story, and I like how in-depth it got into Remus' feelings.

Im not all for slash but in this case it worked nicely. I love all the back ground that you give. I have a good idea about how strong and deep their friendship (and love) is. Poor Remus but he gains a drive to protect Harry. An intresting way to end. :)
-Rrit

This was really good, especially for a first attempt at wolfstar. I really hope you'll write them again, you had a really nice take on them (plus I'm a total sucker for all things wolfstar :3) I liked the mix of past and present in this, it was really nice at telling the story you were trying to portray! Great fic :)

Despite the fact that I don't always love stories that skip around in time, I actually really liked it in this one. Remus reliving his memories of better days just added a really nice touch to the fic. I really liked the friendship between the Marauders that you show in the scene when they tell Remus they know about his condition; they're so accepting, and it's wonderful. '"Come on Remus, did you really think we'd believe your aunt just died and that was why you had to leave Hogwarts? We may not be as clever as you, but even Sirius – 'Oi!' – managed to notice that she had died twice in a year,' - that was awesome, easily the funniest line in the whole fic. There were some SPaG errors - for instance, something like "Shut up Sirius" should be "Shut up, Sirius" - basically, put a comma before somebody's name if you're addressing them like that. Same thing with "Do you think he misunderstood James?"; it should be "Do you think he misunderstood, James?" Anyway, you used the prompts well, also, and this was a really enjoyable read - good work!

That was a beautiful piece. I love how it transitions between the past and the present so effortlessly; despite the breaks between scenes they each seem to relate to each other, flow into each other. Sort of like beads linked together on a chain (I think it was Romy Ash who said that). And you've done a great job in illustrating
how both Remus and Sirius have changed through time.

["I trust this won't be a problem?" He asks] - should that be a lowercase "he"?

Sorry it took so long; I could have sworn I wrote the review last night, but it was nowhere to be found...