I think this is what would've happened if Ron acted similarly to Percy, and 'The Golden Duo' sounds a lot cooler than 'The Golden Trio'. Plus, we know that eventually one of the boys' will start liking Hermione, as it did closer to the end, so then if it was just the two and they fall for each other then there's no third wheel and it won't be awkward. I think you played this out perfectly. Dezipotato out!

Flushed is not another word for blushed in Britain flushed means over exterted Yourself

I wish you had continued writing of this story

fun story hope the sequel muse comes to you soon

can you please put "abandoned" or "discontinued" in the summary? Thanks

Great little story. Though i am not sure why you finished it where you did, as it is marked as complete

Google may not have been around but yahoo was. Great stuff keep it going!

Yes, spelling errors irk me, but you have a good premise, plot and tempo. I like your story overall.

Good to see an other chapter but sad it is the last.
It would nice to see a summary or epilogue on how the story would have played out.
Thanks for sharing your story. Please continue to write.

this is a very nice chapter.

Hey Glimmande Solksen,

Your summary sounded rather promising, so I decided to check this out and I'm reviewing this, as this is the newest chapter after all (2016 and 2013 means three years).

First of all, I doubt Hermione would say "Omg!", she would actually say "oh my god" or some wizarding expression such as "Merlin's beard" (you can, of course, invent your own wizarding sayings).

You also wrote "goodnight" as one word and you wrote talking as "alking" once.

Harry Potter takes place in the 90's and the internet wasn't as popular and used as now.

Your story seems quite nice apart from that, are you continuing?

Please continue and take my advice to heart.

Greetings,

PulyAuthorGirl

Why not just delete the story? That way it's not cluttering up ffnet. I really hope ffnet starts deleting people who start something but can't finish it.

You must be male (like Ronald Weasley), because you couldn't bring a simple story to its climax.

Hope you update soon

this is really sweet

how will ron mom react to harry not being friends with ron
what will happen next
will harry end up getting a full check up while he is in the muggle world by the grangers
will harry end up getting hermione a pet cat by asking her parents what she truly want for christmas that is not a book