Pleas update this soon.

Okay this one was good at first though I got lost later on in the second half so maybe split it in two chapters cause way too much happend to follow. Still it was good and only other complaint is that vanitas seemed really out of character. I mean this guy was a monster in birth by sleep and here he seems to be nice and just an anti hero or somethin. That's my only complaint and good chapter

i likey

I didn't know Namine was Judgemental. Lol. Great chapter!

definatly cool and awesome set up. NOw normally Id expect some organization members to fall but Vexen is there so Id think he'd have a plan to escape I mean he is the brains of the organization. Also heroes are never supposed to have such a huge advantage lol. Just kidding by the way but I hope these three are strong that and Im hjoping the villians either just retreat next chapter or they split up to fight because three on five will be hard to follow unless the fighters split up. Still good chapter and I cant wait for the next one

Interesting. The story is going at a nice pace and has some pretty good humor. Can't wait to see how the fight goes and how the two members face the organization at the next meeting. Please update soon.

I'm enjoying this story

great chapter and enjoyable one. I feel bad for Xion and I also feel bad for aqua still i caant wait for the next one

way to go from funny to serious but still a good chapter. I feel bad for xion but enjoyed it keep writing

oh god what has happend to Xion lol

and the keyblades finally enter good chapter and interesting story. Cant wait for the next one

Poor Axel you could tell he didn't want to do that to his friends but he had no choice. Still good and funny chapter but a few grammatical mistakes but no big deal keep writing

I like the premise of Xion coming from homeschool but overall I think its blemished by a couple of grammatical errors in the first few if not all chapters (e.x: SoftmoreSophomore) but other than the few errors I love the idea and the story is well done and executed with those small blemishes in my cup of tea.

Well things are looking bad with Saix but at least Axels there. Also good to see Xion sticking up for herself. Allthough the parts with her being embarrassed were funny. I cant wait for the next chapter and keep writing

Just me though this is a Like a YuGiOh GX The Dueling Academy Like?