I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

No. You. You can't. It's going so well.
No.

Hocus Pocus much

can I change my last answer? I hate it when someone ships Jack with their OC, and black ice is kinda gross. I mean hello? Jack is 15 ish and Pitch was married with a daughter, and being spirits, Jack is 300 and Pitch is over a billion years old and a total creep.

1. North 100%
2. Claude
3. Human Sweetooth
4. Bennefrost

During that time period, water was unsafe to drink, so all of the kids drank "Ale"
The alcohol wouldn't have hurt him.

Love it! but it made me sad but I loved it!

Since you probably don't know yet I heard that the name of Jack's little sister is Flee.

One Q:
How does jack end up alone with Emma?!

You. Yeah, you. You can't juST TOSS IN ALL THOSE DISNEY REFERERENCES.
Oh wait, you're the author. You can do anything you want. Crap.
Well, here's a lovely poem,
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,(actually they're PURPLE)
I have five fingers, and the middle one's for you. ;)
What, to hardcore? Please don't get offended! I'M SORRY!
Anyways, you can't just toy with my heart like that. I know I'm just A BIT (HA! try four years!) late... but(t)... Constructive criticism! I feel like the beginning went too fast and the middle, section, whatever, is going too slow. This is just a review and I'm giving you the perspective of a reader, (other than yourself) to help you in future stories. I know that many peoples views are different, but(t) I am simply stating MY review... I feel like I didn't need to say that... sorry! Anyways, overall, I believe I am thoroughly enjoying the story! (for now, DUN DUN DUNNNN) I'm only at chapter fourteen, but I believe it will get better! (ha! I seem to believe in a lot of things!)
Good job!
Signing out,
-Jessie ('Jesse' is how you would spell it if you were a boy. Adding the 'i' makes it into a girls name. They do sound the same... whatever bye!)

Questions are fun! Here's my answers:
1. ooh tough one, but.. Definitely Bunny. I do really like Jack though. (NOT in a romantic way, more I want to be best friends with him kind of way)
2. I really like all of them for certain reasons, but my least fav is Pitch
3. I don't really ship anything for RotG
4. Least favorite is definitely Jack/Pitch, i think it's called BlackIce? Whatever it's called its disgusting.
Welp, those are my answers, this is a great fic, I love the (sibling) relationship between Jack and his family.
~L

Is it referencing as much as copying?

I'm praying to God that something good comes out of this story. So far, it's been a colossal waste of time.

Did you just rip off Hocus Pocus? I mean, I knew this story was shitty, but not that shitty

This was so good I couldn't stop reading omg thank you

1. Bunny

3. Tooth x North
4. I don't have one