Reviews for The Ultimate Goal! |
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mayankmundhra597 chapter 37 . 3/5/2017 hey bro you make vergil use 7 pokemon...what the hell man |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2016 Could you please rewrite this without using script format? (Script format is character: quote) |
Guest chapter 61 . 4/14/2016 This is a very interesting fic. Any chance it could be done without script format? |
Guest chapter 44 . 6/25/2015 uh isn't it supposed to be a keystone for the ring. |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/27/2015 Amzing |
HeroofFire101 chapter 52 . 3/20/2015 Agate Village is in the Orre Region, and I know this because I've played Gales of Darkness. |
Pink ranger 13 chapter 4 . 2/9/2015 It's great story |
ShadowGallade chapter 1 . 11/12/2014 When reading the summary and the A/N I was looking forward to reading the story, but then I saw the speech style of 'Character: Quote' and unfortunately, I lost interest. Not only is it against fanfiction guidelines, but I find it loses the descriptive nature of fiction. I'm not going to report this story because I know some people like this style, I really wish it was in normal writing and I'd probably pick up this story immediately. |
Malcolm chapter 53 . 10/1/2014 Love this story. But just one thing where is resiram |
Malcolm chapter 10 . 9/29/2014 This has been one of the best ash and dawn fanfics. I honestly loved it. |
ashsingh chapter 20 . 9/26/2014 Can u please post the next chapter |
Digifan303 chapter 7 . 7/31/2014 Fantastic story! I have to read the rest later. |
shadowlslash456 chapter 10 . 7/4/2014 The best fic EVER CREATED! |
26Naruto26 chapter 4 . 4/17/2014 Wow this chapter had the 2 things that the moment I see them I stop reading that fic forever, 1) Ash leaving his Pokemon behind and going just with Pikachu 2) Ash being a sucking trainer (losing to a guy who started his journey 5 minutes before battle qualifies as that, even though Pikachu couldn't use electric attacks... Pikachu is a freaking veteran and looses to a freaking starter...) |
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 61 . 12/5/2013 Sweet! Hope you create the new story soon! |