you should check out sick puppies.i know it sounds bad but they are kind of cool)

good songs.

-my world
-riptide
-what are you working for
-all the same
-i hate you
-anywhere but here
-pitiful

You might want to up the rating to M for the rape scene, since you are describing the act in no uncertain terms.

loved it but poor Rin having to feel all that pain hopefully bon can help him

For the record you speak better English than a lot of native speakers on this sight

UGH OMFG UPDATE OR ILL DIEEEE.
THIS IS TOO AMAZING TO END

i love this fanfic, are you going to update? please do

i like this story and how its going and i would really love it if you updated it plz i wanna know what gonna happen next (sorry if that sounded rude)

Please update? I'm loving this so far!

Hahaha that was so cute and funny when yukio freaked out xD haha hope you update soon c:!

AIyeeee! More! More! I want it soon! I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens when Bon finds out the truth!

Awesome story, for the first time in a while I can honestly say that I have no complaints.
UPDATE PLEASE!

FoXx8u here.

I have read your story and it's pretty good, all things considered.
I wish to know, do you prefer PM's when dealing with a story's improvement, or are general comments okay?

Let me know and I'll get to work.

Please update soon again! :D I must know what happens! *,*

CLIFFIE! D: Please update soon!

Ahhhhh there so cute XD you have to update please I can't wate for the next chapter hehe thank you for makeing this beauty of a story :)