Wow! I loved it! Wasn't quite sure at first but it was so much better than I was expecting! Thanks!

Love this story, thanks for sharing x

Je relis cette histoire pour la 3eme fois... j'ai un faible pour celle-ci. TROP Génial.

I love this story... read it about 20 times!

I’m liking the story so far although I must say the fact he calls her beautiful all the time is obnoxious

Renee shows all the signs of Histrionic Personality Disorder. Just saying... I don’t know if that’s what y’all intended to do or not, but yeah. If y’all based this on someone you know/knew, I’m so sorry you had to go through that. That would be terrible to have to deal with as a child growing up. I can’t quite peg Charlie, but I’m leaning Borderline personality with some sociopathic and narcissist tendencies. Both Charlie and Renee seem to be experts at gaslighting their child though.

And its done.
Edward told Charlie all this.
Edward was right.
And he got in a few punches which he has wanted to do for years.
So pleased.
Glad Paul and Jacob are someone's bitches. Now they truly know what it feels like.
Well at least Lauren leaned from her mistakes. That has to be some good.
So happy they've all got their hea's.
So happy for all if them.
Thank you for sharing.
Now while I'm always team Edward I have to say James has to be my fav in this fic.

So sad that its almost over.
Love these guys so much.
They have all come so far.
They deserve all the happiness they are getting.

Haha.
I laughed that aro had a girl.
Hmmm.
Edward and bella had a boy, forward 18 years. Lol haha.
Glad renee finally got what she deserved.
Bella is better off without them all in her life.
Still loving James.

It's not often I say this in a fic.
But I love James.
He has to be the best 'side's character in this fic.
I didn't like him at first but he has so grown on me.
He is fab.
Oh my god. Leah. WTF! She really is delusional.
I reckon leah shot harry and Charlie coverd it up cause he thought leah was his daughter.
Love how Edward is guiding seth. He is going to make a great father.

Renne just can't leave it alone.
Hope she gets her karma know too. Well more karma.
Go esme. Lol
So it was Phil that got his revenge, go Phil.
So happy for bella and Edward.

I'm thinking maybe Aro?
I am loving this James and vicky.
They are fab.
Loved the karma.
They deserve so much more.

Loving James more and more but I'm not convinced he doesn't know the whereabouts of Paul and Jacob.
Love how bella told Charlie off.
She really has come so far.
Go Seth.
He made the perfect decision.
Edward's family is growing.
So happy things are falling into place for them all.

Daddy dearest can't bail them out forever.
Not now that Phil is on the case also.
So happy for them.
Wonder if aro is going to be a daddy too from what Edward said about them looking really pale.
Hehe.
Glad they got the argument sorted.
Although things may change now.
Didn't like james at first but rather like him after this chapter.
Although I wonder of he is the reason they can't be located.

Can't say I'm surprised to hear tanya and jake teaming up.
Or that bella left college.
I think her time with mr banner and Edward have helped her see it's not her that's been a fault.
I think she handled what phil had to say very well and I'm so proud of how she stood up to renee.
Love that the Jessica and co have started to let karma.
Tanya has made an even bigger mistake as well as jake and paul.
They will learn not to get on the Cullen's bad side.