Hello,

I am absolutely blown away by the world you have built around our love stricken protagonists in this story. You've managed to craft such an amazing and breathtaking experience out of the brief of moments at the end of the game, and my goodness did you do an impeccable job. From one chapter to the next I feel pulled in various emotional directions with Booker and Elizabeth as we get to explore their relationship as well as some of these new characters that threaten what precious happiness they might have in this brave new world.

I think you've done a phenomenal job with your antagonist, Noah. I've always said that a film/novel or what have you does a great job of character building if they can create a character you actually loathe and hate versus actually being told that "X is bad because I say so".

Truly this is an amazing work with a very unique following of Infinite that you seldom see, and hardly ever see written to such an extent. I know it's a longshot, but I would love to see this story continued! In any event I'm happy it's still up and I'll be following just in case. Keep up the great work!

Respectfully,
TheLifeLongEditor

Man I would love an update, if only Noah was dead and not getting inbetween Booker and Elizabeth. Other then that, great story.

is this actually going to continue?

Keep up the Amazing work.

This is one of the fic that i have read and forgot to mark as fav. Brb. Proper review next time.

Wow this was good . I got sucked into the story and it hasn't been updated for let's see 3-4 years /nice/

Still waiting for the next chapter lol

I'd like to start reading this story, but I think you have discontinued it.
Should I torture myself with an unfinished fic, or should I just keep looking?

Pretty good~

Pretty good

Please write more, this was great

Hey, I recently began reading this fanfiction and I noticed that it hasn't been updated in over a year. Now I don't know if stuff if happening in your life, and if it is please take your time. I just really want you to update the story. It is beautifully written and so interesting. Please update it.

Please update this soon, i read this before i have an account but now i have one i ask you to continue this wonderful story, one of the most amazing, shocking, inmersing and well written story that i ever had the luck to read.

I'M COMPLETELY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY AND IM SO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING EARLIER. EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS SO PERFECT AND I CANT HANDLE IT. ELIZABETH IS SO BADASS AND COOL AND BOOKER IS SUCH A LUCKY SON OF A BITCH. I ALSO LOVE REED A LOT HE'S A VERY INTERESTING CHARACTER AND I MEAN HE'S HOT. HONESTLY. I DISLIKE LILLIAN A LOT AND SHE ANNOYS ME AND I JUST WANT HER AWAY FROM BOOKER. I KINDA LIKE THE IDEA OF ELIZABETH AND REED TOGETHER BUT THEN I THINK OF BOOKER AND IT'S LIKE NOOOO WAYYYYY. AND SEEING REED AT ELIZ'S MERCY LIKE THAT IS AMUSING TO NO END. YOUR WRITING STYLE IS SO GOOD AND THIS CHAPTER MADE ME LAUGH QUITE A FEW TIMES TOO. I REALLY LIKE KARL AND STEFANO TOO, THEY'RE BOTH HILARIOUS. AND ERNEST IS SUCH AN INNOCENT GUY I WANT HIM TO BE SAFE AHHHH PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE THANKS

Please please please update soon! This is an AMAZING read!1231!1