hope to read more.

I didn't think you were still doing anything with this story here.

Well good luck.

I see; alright I understand but I would like to ask questions

Will Lelouch tell the other Black Knights about himself being an Exiled Prince with Tohdoh remembering him? And will Lelouch tell them of Geass and C.C explain what Geass and Codes are so no betrayal could happen?

I'm also wondering why and how does traitor suzaku, sweet Shirley and she-devil Milly get those visions? Will Rivalz, Jeremiah and Rolo also gets those visions? Also will Lelouch get visions on Rolo's death?

I kinda feel pity for Rolo; he has lived his whole life as an assassin for the order. I'm sorry for all these questions as I need my curiosity to be sated.

Bring up more of Suzaku-Cecile. That poor guy needs love to prevent insanity.

Yeah, Kallen doesn't deserve to be with Lelouch if she isn't going to believe in him, point weapons at him, etc.

It is steering not stirring. Also one of your sentences was "...always isn't" that is not even anywhere close to creating a sentence that actually makes sense. You should also probably italicize locations, times, and dates to differentiate them from the regular text. A Knightmare doesn't appear to a person, it appears in front of a person, next to a person, etc. Some of yoru phrasing is redundant and unnecessary. Try reading what you read out loud to yourself and you can probably catch these kinds of things.

Can you please pick one POV? It becomes really disjointed when there is several of them.

i love it keep up the good work

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY
DON'T GIVE UP ON IT
I LOVE THIS STORY

I'd love to help because I really enjoyed this story but I have one story adopted that I'm trying to work on and I didn't change the first cheaters that were made to the original and just added in...I would love to see the story develop more

Update again please! Awesome fic!

like XD

Coolio.

the only thing that I do not like is all the POV changes