oh my lord u have to update this soon! I can't believe that i didn't find this until today! Oh and do u know exactly how much older Merry is than Pippin cuz i was just curious? Please update this soon!

Wonderful plot idea! Can't wait to see how you resolve the whole thing. And you do such a believable little-Pip. :)

morpheus

Not at all bad-you've captured the sort of ill,fevered feeling quite well-I really felt for Pippin. Merry's cute here. Not sure what your aim in making what seemed to all accounts a perfectly healthy hobbit,both in the book and the movie, seriously ill, but there we go...

Like the story, but the &%$# $! computer tell me there are five chapters on it, but will only show me one! %*##$% &*! I'll try again later to see if it works. Good job! _

good, well phrased

watch out for spelling

keep writing!

ooooh! Poor Pippin! *cries* Do more! Must do more! Poor lil Pippin and Merry!

oh i really like your story,please update soon

Please, write on *begging*! That seems to be a very good fanfic!

Good good good! wright more! um...can I have a Frodo plushie instead of Merry and Pip? Pwease! Frodo, me wurv Frodo! *takes a deep breath* !

*gasps for breath* and *gasp* I can't *gasp* spell! *gasp*

I do so enjoy Bree fics! And Pippin angst! I am beginning to get a taste for Pippin angst-he's so little and cute. I think you should continue. I'm curious to see what happens next!

It's very good so far. I like how you used lines from the movie, I really hope you continue!

MORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRE~~ I LOVE IT!

I LOVED that I just love Pippin stories and this is one of the best. Please write more!

Augachica

Nice! I think you should keep going. Oh and finally something from Merry's POV, hes my favorite hobbie!