Reviews for Heart no Kuni no Edith?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28
Alice and Celia (1983 anime) - Another canon sibling yin yang
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28
An AU where Alice and Celia (1983 anime) live their own opposite, distant free home-lives.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17
Alice and Celia (1983 anime) - Another sibling yin yang
Sister-less fans chapter 1 . 4/17
An AU where Alice and Celia (1983 anime) are raised as a sister-less only children at hearts who live their own different, distant free home-lives separately.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17
Middle Child Syndrome: Alice has just become an "adult", but still isn't as graceful as Lorina, seeing as she also has childish manners that, at her age, aren't well seen, contrary to her younger sister.
Free.Spirit140 chapter 2 . 6/6/2015
shame you haven't continued this!
Mythia-san chapter 2 . 2/24/2014
Oh, so Alice is here? You know, forgetting the summary was dumb, honestly. I'm slow that way.

I hope that you update thus more frequently because it's really good. Peter does have his unrealistic fantasies with Alice from time to time, being delusional and babbling too much in a funny daze.

Poor Edith. My friend had a hard time talking to my other friend because of a rude comment she accidentally said about her. They made up now, but I was just the monkey in the middle of what seemed like a large gap of a grudge...not necessarily a brawl.

You're making me curious as to where this story will go next. Will Edith meet Ace the wandering knight who loses himself in the forest I'm assuming she's in? Will she run to the Clock Tower? Hmm...

As for the filthy mangy cat...is that Boris or Blood? Peter calls them both filthy and disgusting and such (since he's a germophobe), yet the cat part is really getting me wondering...

Update soon, but don't rush! :)

xxXMythiaXxx
Mythia-san chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
Oh, so that's what you meant by an AU. You had me wondering.

Anyway, this was good, truly. So Peter was aiming for Alice, but ended up with Edith? No wonder there's a question mark in the title! Haha, just figured that out...

You're a fine author with a nice style of writing, with accuracy from the manga. Sadly, I haven't played any of the games (yet) so I'm not sure if it's exactly the same in the game.

That being said and done, Edith really loves her sister, aw. That's really nice. You evidently researched a ton on this fanfic to make it accurate, so I applaud you. Good job!

I noticed you update. It's been a might long while, wow! Hope you get back into the swing of things! :)

xxXMythiaXxx
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
Thank the lords u have finally updated! Now please keep updating
EpicCj chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
I like the story so far!i hope u continue writing it
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
This awesome and touching
Ignis76 chapter 2 . 2/22/2014
Poor Edith :(
animeandmangafangirl chapter 2 . 2/22/2014
wow, i forgot about this story. keep it up! it is getting interesting
k chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Please update, this is very interesting
madeofbadpuns chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
pretty please?
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