"...the Shikon Miko was even participating in the Rites. ..".

I love the story and am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for more and what is going to happen next.
;-)

called it on twins XD

Firstborn heir is always a male, firstborn of a priestess is always a female...might get twins XD

What the actual fuck thoooo?! I mean I like the story and all but fuck! This is such a drastic change in how Sesshoumaru treats Kagome. Fuck!

W-What... The... Actual fuck?! What is this? What the fuck is he doing?! Seriously? It's... A little bit too soon don't you think?

Amazing

You never edited ot finished it? Damn. The story really got better. I would've liked to know what happened...

Couple questions... when inuyasha arrived at totosais, interrupting the couple, how did he know about the rose? Also, in this chapter, why is kagome talking like she can only have half blood pups when she was literally telling sesshomarus mother that miko CAN make full blooded youkai pups?

Shes mated for a day and she gives in just because of a couple dreams about him with other women? That she KNOWS either never happened or happened before he was with her? That's just stupid. The plot, I mean. It's lazy. I'm sorry. But I do was ft to be honest. This story started out good, but it's just gradually gotten lazy. Skipping from one scene to the next, paragraph to paragraph. Sometimes even WITHIN a paragraph. Lack of punctuation, missing words, and even words inserted that make no sense within its context make the story difficult to follow. It feels like you've waited too long between writing chapters and you didn't take the time to go over what you've previously written leading up to your current chapter. And sometimes it feels rushed, like you're hopping from a to b to c with no progression. I'm still going to continue reading, but I do hope it gets better.

Wait. What happened? The was this big buildup, like her reiki was about to explode or something. Everyone leaves but sesshomaru stays. And then... Rins like 'hey someones at the door' aaaaand he goes? What? Did her reiki calm? That scene fell flat big time.

So what happens next? What does Sesshy have in store for her? How does she defeat Naruku? Why haven' t you updated anything yet?

I really enjoy reading this story I do hope you continue to write this story, as I plan to read it and find out what happens as soon as you do.

I love the story. Pleasr fo not forget to continue your story

Loving the story morewhen will this naràku threat be over. Kags and seshy deserve their happiness.