Reviews for Because |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was fantastic and well written. I did not expect a bit of angst from Luna's side of the story and it is very much welcome. Still, hope you come back for this though. This is just really amazing writing. |
![]() ![]() Are you ever gonna continue this fic? After all these years, I still have hope hehe. This story is just too good, and I love how you write Luna! Please update it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know if you'll ever continue this story or if you'll even see this but I just feel like I should tell you that I loved this first chapter and I'm curious to how this whole friendship came to be, since you've shown how Luna joined but not how the other three became friends which I'm very curious about. I hope, maybe, this will be continued cause I'm curious to see how this story ends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() CONTINUE IT ALREADY YOU SLOW CUCUMBER |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plz continue on |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! I loved every bit of this! Please continue! I hope you could finish this fic! I couldn't stop reading! Please write MORE! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A interesting story. Really liked how you wrote from Luna's point of view as we saw a lot of her thoughts and emotions. You did really well to convey a lot of emotions through Luna as we see how she sees her surrounding and what she is feeling overall. I could feel the desperation and the joy she feels through your writing and must say that it is amazing how you describe each situation. The transition she goes through as she realizes she has friends is well done. I would really like to see more of this one as well as when you are able to do the other three point of views as well. I am sure it will be amazing as this first chapter. Thank you. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() I really wish you continue writing this story! There is no nothing like this in HP fanfic world. I love how you put Harry and Draco friendship, plus H/L pairing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is incredible! Your writing is so sophisticated, and it makes so much sense to see things from Luna's POV for once. Everyone thinks that Luna doesn't care but she does, and she loves her friends and this portrays Luna so incredibly well. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope u update this. I rlly enjoy readin about these couples 2gether. Usully its either hermione/draco n harry/ginny. Or harry/luna and hermione/ron. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. It's gorgeous and how you write in Luna's perspective is brilliant. So much adorable Harry/Luna and Draco/Hermione. I'm in love. Please, update soon! |
![]() ![]() Nice story, I hope you will update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't read many (well any) stories from Luna's POV so this one was a lovely surprise and brought tears to my eyes, looking forward to reading the remaining chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like that Ron is left out and he was never mean to her he just thought that she was werid, and she alway call him Ronald and he hate that name |
![]() ![]() Good to hear news of you from your friend! I'm glad that this story isn't abandoned and will be continued, cuz this is too good and original to be left uncomplete. I hope you're doing well already. |