What happened to silas and Niles and the original plot it made sense unroll u got to the black orchid xhapter

Please. Please. Please update. It’s been getting really good lately and you can’t just stop it there.

I would just like to say some things about your last few chapters. I'm not gonna lie I hated the idea of Clary having demon blood. And I also don't like the fact tht she is continuously reminded tht she thinks Jace is dead. I would like to make a suggestion. I would like it if you could make it to where Clary could kill Sebastian and Clary could finally go back to the institute and find Jace alive and magnus could give her all of her memories back and the demon blood could somehow leave her body. I would really like to see tht Jace and Clary wouldn't have to worry about anything except the weekly demon hunt. You would be my very best friend if u did this. I loved ur story from the beginning but the I really started to not like it as much and I'm soooooo sry of this offends u I'm usually really nice but I'm also very honest and I didn't like it all tht much in the last few chapters. Again I'm very very sry.

I really don't like the fact tht Clary is a demon or the fact tht she is continuously reminded tht she thinks Jace is dead. In my opinion u should have a story where Clary can finally kill, and I mean actually kill him and be able to find Jace again and Magnuson recover heremories and her to somehow get rid of the demon blood in her. I would like it Jace and Clary could live happily together finally and not have to worry about anything but the usual demon hunt. This is just my opinion. I'm so very sry if u take any of this the wrong way but it's not sposed to b like tht. Thank u for reading my coment

SO FUCKING CONFUSED. DONE

that was good

Nadia's dead? No. No. Noooo. (Still in denial) Nadia's not dead...she's just turned into a werewolf or something, yeah...

bai simon and jace! hope yall had a nice life!

EVERYONE GET FREAKIN' STABBED

y duz everyone always get stabbed? it kinda deppressing

Clary. Just accept the fact that Jace loves you. Not me.

Scott u bastard.

Clary is such a bitch I need some Clace. Wheres the Clace?

Okay. So... the first few chapters (the new ones) were really really really great. I would even come close to saying one of the best mortal instruments Clace love stories. I love the story line and... everything... reaction and all that. Were just perfect. Everything fit. Then I read some of the 'old chapters' and there was confusoon at first, but I really wanted to read on so I tried. There is no doubt that the new chapters are better. But I still liked the old chapters. I think the only problem is that... the reaction aren't natural. They don't fit the characters. I mean... Jace. He just doesn't show emotions. He doesn't. Only on moments he's alone with Clary and even then not most of the time. Also. When he uses romantic nicknames for Clary... it's only sarcastic. He would never truly have some romantic nickname for her. Partly because he knows Clary wants to be seen as tough and not some hopelesly in love girly girl. Maybe he would have SOME cute nickname, but he would only dare to say it when she's like falling asleep and won't remember he said it the day after. Magnus though... his reaction stayed the same. And that's good. He's just good as he is. Maybe a bit more sarcasm here and there but... that isn't even neccesary. But I think those reactions is part of what you're working on in your new chapters. If you want some inspiration ore you're stuck with something I'' happy to reread a few things and help, cause I really think this story wil be so awesome when you are done with all the chapters. And I'm sorry for my critics here. Don't mistake me. The story is great.

For now... I AM going to stop reading. Cause... everything ia just better in the new chapters. But I will follow and favorite...

Xxx Anne

Okay... please explain. I'm VERY confused. So... Tedros is now Sebastian? And Stiles isn't called Silas anymore. And he's suddenly not 18 anymore, but younger? And I thought the whole house knew about the Jace/Clary break-up reason (the cheating) but Stiles didn't know. And what happened to Scott? Where is he?