This was honestly so beautiful to read... And yes, I definitely agree. Hinamori definitely drew the shorter end of the stick whenever it came to Aizen :( it's horrible how much the girl had to suffer through... I love her interactions with everyone here :) I really liked her interaction with Ichigo here too! I feel like the two would have gotten along pretty well tbh... and of course, Hitsugaya would be trying to put some distance between the two of them :") This was truly so well-done! Thank you for writing this 333

You deserve a lot of applause on writing this.! I love it every bit, the way Shinji and Momo talk I think would be like that too. Shinji being casual because he's feeling guilt , Momo a bit wary ,the way she approach the subject of being betrayed seems legit to me .

The other interactions with the characters as well the thing is I was a bit hesitant on reading Ichigo's turn but you did it quiet well and I understand why you put Ichigo too in her "One of the Visitors"

On Hitsugaya's end... That friggin make my heart clench with anticipation , in the end I like how you end their interaction by just being the old them.

Hopefully you'll make more of HitsuHina fanfic :D

Ohhh I love Hinamori-chan too. Shinji's opening act is very nice. It's a good thing you put there. I also liked Kurosaki's visit. It's was most unlikely and unexpected, but it was nice. I ship those two, anyway. Toshiro's reconcilation with her is also touching. Few words, but touching. More than enough for them. It almost broke my heart when Rangiku wanted to tell her about Hitsugaya's visits. *sigh*. This is just sooo great.

I love this...so much. *_*

My thoughts were so aligned that ending note that it's slightly disconcerting to have been read in advance by a story- but i suppose it helps curb the obsession hahaha
lovely- and i wonder too- how momo ended up, especially with a glimpse in the new arc
and especially in the knowledge of her being in someone like shinji

and kudos to hitsuhina- albeit the shinji/momo... interesting hahaha

lovely work and fantastic- well thought of and a good read 3

Such a lovely insight on how things would be for darling Momo! Great work

Beautiful, just beautiful :') . I'm a huge fan of Momo too, I really hope Shinji and her get more screentime together.

I really liked this! :)

What happened to Momo over all just upset in canon, i like how you started to form friendships with many other Shinigami, including Ichigo. Momo needs more respect, and a shot at redeeming herself, which i did in my work.

Great one shot! I too feel that Momo gets the short straw from fellow readers though she is probably one if the few who is deeply affected by Aizen. Though I'm a Hitsuhina shipper I feel that Shinji/Momo is my guilty ship XD I am really looking forward to their interactions as displayed In the novel and already in the manga. I was a bit surprised and happy that you included Ichigo? I felt that he would bear some guilt as he was to realize the truth but late in relaying it-which would probably bruise his hero ego?
Renjii's little bribery with Unihana is priceless! I like the detail you've given to each visit and especially to Momo and Shiro since their dis the one that probably needs the most reconciling :) great job!
PCE

I looove this story. Tite made the poor Momo been trough so much, but she is a strong woman.
You do a really good job with the characters development, everybody seems so IC.
Hope to read more bleach things from you :D

I have no words to explain how much I liked this story of yours. I love the way you portrayed the characters, they're just being themselves and I like when a story has no (or little) OoC.

Keep like that! :)

As a huge fan of Momo Hinamori I have to say I really, truly loved this story.

Great story. The interactions between Momo and everyone was really good. I liked how you described the relationship the she has with Shinji.