I mean, having him be an asshole, then magically change him back... That's a bigger copout than anything else.

Work on your English more. And that "split up depending on how many years of training you did" is directly copied from 50 other fanfics. Come up with your own ideas.

Also, all your characters are retarded. Why did you write this? Other than for your self-satisfaction of making Gohan snap at people you dislike?

2 eme relecture et je trouve marrant ce qui se passe avec videl et son père mais beaucoup trop long en terme de force entre gohan et vegeta, alors pour trunck c'est dur mais il ne peut pas dire grand chose n'ayant pas vu le march.
L'écart est beaucoup trop importante à mon goût car il est largement capable d'être en ssj2 et la il ne l'a pas fait.

Awesome story

It's true...he is super sand lesbian

Boi, I don’t even know why I’m still reading this. cya

Bullshit, is everyone fine with murder? Really?

I work like to see Gohan/Lime. Wait no, Gohan/Lime/Erasa but not over the top and without both being unrealistically ok with polygamy. Lime seems most understanding of Gohan, and they have most likely developed a much deeper relationship. But Erasa was his first friend at Orange Star. Maybe he could like both but needs to choose one. Videl has not undergone any development, so you can cross her off the list. Did Mark eat his moms spaghetti? Also, finally some conflict... even if it lasted 3 paragraphs.

Boi, she hulk Videl incoming. WHY!?

Finally a worthy opponent of our (supposedly) Namek saga level Gohan... General Tao. Yeah, the guy who was beaten at the end of Dragon Ball by TIEN, and this was when Raditz would have been considered a god.

Once again, why is a DBZ fanfiction focusing on the business life of Gohan? You could replace Gohan with any entrepreneur at this point and it wouldn’t matter. There is not an ounce of conflict. I mean, I know Gohan is great but there should be at least something going on.

Kinda disappointed with how easily Gohan convinced everyone that Hercule sucked. Also I love how you think Gohan was weaker than Trunks and Goten. The Supreme Kai was amazed by Gohan’s strength but not phased by Goten or Trunks.

I actually love your 17. And then we’ll get married and have children ... and then there will be I will feed him all the wedges.

I know that Gohan is a genius when it comes to fighting and in intellect, his social life was his only conflict. If you take that away the story gets kind of boring. We all know that he can beat Hercule physically and mentally, so unless I see Hercule getting some hits in (maybe ruin his social lifethis story can only go one way.

I feel really bad for Erasa, Gohan was a real jerk even if he didn’t really mean it.