Reviews for The Subject of Payment
Mentathial chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
w-o-w
Pen-Always-In-Hand chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
Ooh, very interesting. Ursula's awesome and I like the different interactions between all the magic-makers
Leni chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
OH, this is *fantastic* Superb characterization and, one of the things I love the most, believable outside POV!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Regina is a BITCH.
Walkinghorse1964 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Most excellent. I love the way you've tied all of the different story lines together and the characters are written true to form. Too many times writers tend to put their own slant on how they think the characters would speak or perform and it goes wildly off track. You've kept them behaving exactly as they should.
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Fantastic. The images are vivid, the characters are great, the dialogue is right on, and Ursula is perfect. The Dark One dressing like a fop shouldn't go unnoticed.
The Junkiest Toon chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
LOVE this! You are such a FANTASTIC writer! Everything you do, is fabulous. everything. It boggles my mind. Love the Zutara and Rumbelle support! Please keep writing! :D
harrygirl320 chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
I loved this so much!
elye chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
incredible! i can't get over how amazingly well you capture the character's voices. and of course how you sneak in "poor unfortunate soul" and "tale as old as time"! Soo good!
Incendia Glacies chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
this is perfect! i can completely see this playing out in an episode!
Drac1026 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Cool story. You wrote Ursula very well.
ShakespeareanHoneyBadgers chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
This is brilliant... I really don't know why it doesn't have more reviews/favorites. I love the way you write Ursula, it's just so her. And everything fits together so beautifully... Thank you for writing this.
fukaimoriMidori chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I was so happy to find an email telling me you wrote a new story. I've read this about four times, and though I don't know the series and am probably not getting a million references here, the narrative is amazing and easy to read, as well as hilarious at the right moments.
Once Upon a Faerytale chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
This is delicious! It's Enthralling what one can take from a simple throwaway comment of Regina's. :D
Leafena chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
that was very good clever and well written
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