Oh. My. God. That was amazing!
SO hot! Lemon, lemon, lemon... /

it was a nice chapter lol i liked how everything was more than just swimming, actually it's sort of fishy how in the anime they are soooo took really passionate about not just swimming but swimming together lol D hahaha D it's a strange form to seduce someone (i think but then again is not like I am very experienced hehe)

Well thank you very much for writing take care )

That was hot.
Normally I don't see Rin as. The uke but you did a fantastic job with this.
And the joke at the edge slaps their competive edge a bit (in a good way).
This is awesome sauce.

I can't even count the number of smutfics I've read in my days and I have to say; this one is one of my favorites. PERFECTLY paced and WONDERFULLY...savory? I guess? I DUNNO I JUST REALLY LIKE RIN BOTTOMING OK OMG SHOWER SEX UGH THIS WAS PERFECTO. GRACIAS.

beautiful

That was sooo good. I loved the ending

I loved that Haru was on top XD I love this story thank you for writing this.

Ah, yes. This is really all I could ever ask for in a fic. /throws glitter on it.

oooooooooooo I really like your Rin. Your Rin's closer to my own headcanon and it's really perfect woooo please write more Sharbait! XDD