A great build-up.

Wow, this is such a great and interesting idea. So far so good.

I was like why is there not another chapter of this it and awesome concept because it a twist on the Sherlock theme please update again soon so many questions need to be answered for Sherlock.

Nice. Quite nice. Light, somehow, but I do like stories like this very much. As I never saw any version of Sherlock's story, however, I don't know about what happened with the father and mother... Their mother was there in "It All Started in a Bank," but now she wasn't there and they seemed to be orphans.

Next thing that I wondered about was: How many years were there in between the siblings? It was not clear from the story, though I got the impression that Mycroft seemed to be far older than his siblings. I don't know, it would bejust nice to know...

Otherwise, I loved reading the story, and hope there will be more soon enough. I scanned through some of your bio and found out about the reason why you didn't update for so long. Apparently your problems are similar to mine. :) Well, but I do hope you'll update some time. Here was where I got yet another fic where Mycroft was a good (over)protective elder brother, and it was great! I thought I'd only get it from "It All Started in a Bank," but here was like an unexpected bonus! :D

Thank you for writing, and I do hope you write more about Mycroft (especially him as the (over)protective elder brother and also as the British government). I want to see MANY more of it! :)

Cheers,
Rey

This is fantastic and just what I was look for it intriguing and I really can't wait for more please update again soon.

*still pouting* still upset about it being a cliffhanger. Argh to you!

Really, Really enjoying this story. Can not wait to see what may come next!

Awesome story! I always love these sibling stories! More please! :D

Hooray you updated cannot wait for the reunion

-melts- I'm so happy that you updated. You just made my bad day great. Now to wait for the next chapter... Back to work.

good second chapter looking forward to the next one

Oh, I LIKE this one. Looking forward to your updates.

I like that they are all family-strained as it is.

V.

Great story line and writing! Can't wait for the next update!

Hope to see more, it's an interesting idea (best kind for a Sherlock fic) and this is a great start to making it a story.

love this story line. can't wait for the next update.