Okay so I initially only found this fic because I was searching for Hot Pie fics (I have my own GOT ffn and there is an upcoming scene with Hot Pie and Lommy so I wanted to see how other people had portrayed them). And boy oh boy was I glad to come across this fic. What INCREDIBLE writing! The only small piece of constructive criticism I have is, if possible, to insert more dialogue into it. That being said, the characters have such great inner thoughts as you write them, that the fic is great even without lots of dialogue. Wonderful work, PLEASE continue! I would love to see how you write their reunion!

Can't wait until they reunite!

Wow - the symbolism in our writing in unreal - kudos!

I was SO hoping that this would be an AU where he stayed :'(
:''''''''(

Oh this chapter broke my heart more than a bit; the way you are able to convey such complex emotions through your writing is just so amazing!

Omg I am in LOVE with your writing! The dynamic you've crafted between the trio is BRILLIANT

This chapter just fixed a part of my soul
Literally
SO beautifully written, and such a unique perspective. Well done!

Since this is a odder story I'm not going to leave a review for each chapter, instead I'm going to leave a review for the story as a hole here.

This story was interesting, I did like a lot of the internal conflict of the characters and their unquice pov's. I found your take on hot pie especially interesting.

I also really like how you kind of created this ( for the lack of a better word) timeless feel to the story as your wrighting consortated on the characters and their own Delmas rather then the plates of the books or tv show. Which I found very interesting.

How ever your story could have used a bit more actually dialogue ( aka people talking to each other) as I think thier might be what two conversations in the entire story.

I also liked the way you wrote Gendrys thoughts in this last chapter and how you displayed the effects of isolation and regret.

How every their was one major iusse with this story, and sorry to say it's Frenzy. The idea of Gendry losing control of him self and attacking Ayra and latter having a wank after it was extremely uncomfortable and bad form. It sadly felt s bad taste in my mouth and that tainted the rest of the story, not enough to make it unlikable but enough to make it deeply flawed.

So all in all I give this story a 6/10 an interesting premise and delivery with uncomfortable start, and lact of chacters conversations. I hope you update soon but I doubt this will be one of my favourites.

Yours Alaster Boneman

This story was amazing. My heart really went out to both characters. Please, if you can, Make a sequel. I would Love to see them reunite and Arya's reaction.

This is a moving, poetic piece of work that encapsulates the Gendry-Arya relationship. Well-written!

Ok, the last bits made me cry... I am on my period today... ooops TMI

I hope there's more to this! :D

This was amazing! Loved it!

You are my hero

But not today :') very pretty