Reviews for Beyond Thoughts and Emotions
zerozeno chapter 8 . 1/7/2015
Well im out i mean if your no good with harem just kill this fic and be done with it. then start a new fic were naruto fuses with luffy and is first and only girl is boa. Because the idea of him world jumping and leaving behind the wemon he loves to do whatever while hes off with some other chick is unrealistic and just unfair for mei and tsunade not a flame just saying it'll help stop fans such as myself from leaving for good. Peace.
firetemplar415 chapter 8 . 1/7/2015
Oh well. since its becoming a weird one piece story, this is where I stop reading.

Good day.
The Immortal Doctor Reid chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
I think you've had a couple of issues with replacing the chapters, you should really fix that, it's really unreadable.

I can't wait to read the story, so I hope you fix it soon.
Rogue Lumiere Declair chapter 8 . 1/7/2015
I actually liked what you had going and I am very disappointed that you on basically abandoning what you had. As well as slightly annoyed that you asked for a poll then completely ignored it. I like your writing as well as the plot you had going for this so far. But with you changing it to completely One Piece I will no longer be following or reading it. I hope it works out well for you. But I do hope you know you have disappointed some of your readers.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/6/2015
My opinion is you should keep on going with what you already have and just rewrite and improve upon it. So keep up the good work and hope you update soon.
heavydestro chapter 7 . 1/6/2015
Go ahead and turn it into a cross over im interested to see how that will play out
esparza3368 chapter 7 . 1/6/2015
lol, you should do what is best for the story as you see fit. Waste of time asking for readers for their opinion if you are going to disregard the results of the poll.
Jhonie chapter 7 . 1/6/2015
I say go ahead and make it a One Piece crossover, and follow the canon loosely, emphasis on loosely, I'm tired of people treating canon as if it were blueprints rather than a foundation to build upon, but do make sure Naruto doesn't steal all of the glory. Luffy is the captain and the foremost fighter of the strawhats, and few things annoy me more in fanfiction than stories where someone, an oc or otherwise, takes that away from him. If you bring Naruto into One Piece, into the Strawhat pirate crew, do not take away what the crew is. It is a family. And Luffy is their leader. Simpleminded and childish most of the times, yes, and he may appear stupid at most times, but he is still a very capable leader, and the core, the foundation and the supporting pillar of the crew. The crew relies on him just as much, if not more than he relies on them. Him being the strongest of them is no small part of this. Too many authors take him at face value, writing him as merely an idiot. See that you don't. Focus your story on Naruto if you will, but be very careful not to dumb anyone down. Luffy is, more than anything, two things. He is a dreamer and a leader. This makes crossovers with Naruto dangerous, since Naruto is these things also. Few can make it work. Can you?

I suppose that what I'm saying is that yes, I think that you should go ahead and do a crossover where they join the strawhats, but only if you respect who and what they are. Never take One Piece at face value. Otherwise, i say do a re-write. Zoro following anyone but Luffy just seems like it would never happen. Ever.
EMSNaruto chapter 6 . 1/6/2015
Just Remake the story plus,I never really watched one piece
Luffy the Great chapter 7 . 1/6/2015
I vote take it to the one piece world. If you follow canon somewhat it would be interesting to see how things would be different. If you do decide to do this I'd have to think about who to vote for to be in the crew. But ultimately it's up to you.
keyshawn9811 chapter 7 . 1/6/2015
The naruto and one piece but if your getting rid of the naruto ,tsunade ,mei terumi paring then never mind
skg1991 chapter 7 . 1/6/2015
I like the idea of a one piece crossover...but i'd be really sad for tsunade and mei.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
im going to stop reading this since its obvious you intend for him to use bodies as paths something he would never do expecially since his said many times to both kabuto as orochimaru his utmost hate over their practice of edo tensei and dead soul jutsu, for you to now say he would use corpses himself would be the most hypocritical and disgusting move ever. expecially since he cold use shadow clones as several 7th paths instead of being limited to 1 power per body and he would keep to his pricipals. you can see ones morality by what they write and yours is kinda sick can you imagine using your parents in such a jutsu? no why? because its sick thats why dickhead i arrest my case
yindragonkiba chapter 6 . 12/18/2014
Love the fic
willow1996 chapter 6 . 12/17/2014
Please update soon you can't stop there you just can't
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