Love love love love love love love love love love love love

The only thing I'll say is that when a baby is born the eyes are always blue. They change into their actual color later on in life. As for the hair, babies can be born with it, but very little amounts.

Other than that this was a fun short read.

omg I'm crying and laughing at the same time XD

omg I'm crying and laughing at the same time XD

Your landship line and Merrill's had me in stitches. Too perfect.

this is so cute and domestic,,,,i am so overwhelmed!
thank you for writing this,,,im currently grinning like a sappy fool,,this made my morning!

the way isabela suddenly stopped babbling and asked hawke why she asked if she could wed peeps was great. XD
and no matter how annoying lady busson appeared i kind of find her.. charming. XD maybe bc she says exactly what she means and is quite badass in her own way. ;D
aaaand my absolute favorite part was the one with carver. XDD
when i read this part it played out like a movie in my head. XD
i think it's very cute that fenris didn't get angry at being hit. :DDD
or did he (at first X'D ?)!?

well, okay. i have one chapter left. thanks again~! X3

You know, I had a read into thiss fanfic before. C:
But I didn't want to read more than an oneshot.
I was again on my way to university and reading your art makes me wish I would need longer than a hour. X3
Still gotta review what I liked/loved in the first chapter. :D
I didn't expect Hawke to propose to him then and there and I think that made it a whole lot more adorable. X3
Oh and! You got me smirking like an idiot at the Justice-as-the-magical-godfather-part. XD
The peeps on the train must have thought me mad. XDD
And the way she handled these thugs was wow. I mean ofc, Hawke is badass, but the way you described her badassery was... badass (if you allow that example, lol). XD

I feel like my headache got better.
Probably bc I could read more lovely fanfiction of yours. 3

In the last ten years I can count on my fingers the number of times that I have genuinely cried at anything, be it from sadness or gladness.

So when I tell you that this has made me uncontrollably giggle-cry for a solid ten minutes now with no signs of stopping, I want you to understand how highly that speaks of your work. Sincere thanks from a truly moved reader.

Oh my gosh I absolutely loved this story! So glad it connected with your story On Waking. Great job!

I Love this so so much its amazing! And being the sentimental person i am i cried at the end. It was Beautiful.

This story was beautiful and was really close to bringing tears to my eyes.

It's so beautiful. I'm rereading this for, probably, the third time over several years, and this story is still beautiful.

That was amazingly sweet. You truly described each scene with detail and beauty enough to paint pictures. I love how we follow Hawke and even Fenris' mindsets as her pregnancy progresses. The to change quite dramatically from beginning to end, yet I can still easily see each character acting exactly as such. I love the jokes you threw in there. cracked me up when I wasn't cooing over precious moments. Terrific story.

Very sweet and funny! You captured their personality so well! And i absolutely love your Hawke!